|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| ChristmasShoes 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseI don't blame him. This made me smile a lot, I like it. =) It's Sweet. |
| NellieGURL 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseLOL! GREAT STORY! :) |
| fullyxalive 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseAw that is so adorable. I loved it. I was actually thinking about doing a Halloween fic, but it would be scary. ^_^ Great job. |
| SuperDope 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseCUTE! lol very cute! HALLOWEEN is so gold! hehe, keep up the good work |
| Maddiecake 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseI know for a FACT seven year olds don't talk like babies... unless they have speech impediments, but that's not really a common thing... I don't think... xD OH MY GOSH THIS WAS FUNNY! Especially the gingerbread man bit :D |
| The Motorcycle Boy Lives 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was really funny! I loved it! DEFINITLY WRITE MORE LIKE THIS! |
| Flag 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseHaha. Poor Darry, poor poor Darry. And Dally for being with those embarrassing children. Great job ^.^ |
| XXPonyboyXXLoverXX 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuse"YA CAN'T CATCH ME, I'M THE GINGERBREAD MAN," Two-Bit yelled, holding up a ginger bread man he had just gotten, running around waving it above his head and shrieking with glee. ME TO! Im a gingerbread man with Two-bit! This was really cute! I think you should turn it into a story instead of a one-shot, but it is a really cute/good one-shot and is fine as one, but it would be cute as a story to...haha Poor Darry. |
| ThatWeasley 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseIt's an alright story. But, I think you could make it better, if you put a little more effort into it. You should try to put more detail and length into it. |
| xodamhsoirxo 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abusehehe that sent me into a fit of giggles, I can picture all of them being bitty. :P you're so right about 7 year olds not talking like babies! I think people spend too much time with people their age and under-estimate little kids way too much. great story! |