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ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 1,
abuseI don't blame him.
This made me smile a lot, I like it. =) It's Sweet.
NellieGURL
2006-10-27
ch 1,
abuseLOL! GREAT STORY! :)
fullyxalive
2006-10-25
ch 1,
abuseAw that is so adorable.

I loved it. I was actually thinking about doing a Halloween fic, but it would be scary. ^_^

Great job.
SuperDope
2006-10-25
ch 1,
abuseCUTE!
lol

very cute! HALLOWEEN is so gold!

hehe, keep up the good work
Maddiecake
2006-10-25
ch 1,
abuseI know for a FACT seven year olds don't talk like babies... unless they have speech impediments, but that's not really a common thing... I don't think... xD

OH MY GOSH THIS WAS FUNNY!

Especially the gingerbread man bit :D
The Motorcycle Boy Lives
2006-10-24
ch 1,
abuseThat was really funny! I loved it!


DEFINITLY WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!
Flag
2006-10-24
ch 1,
abuseHaha.

Poor Darry, poor poor Darry. And Dally for being with those embarrassing children.

Great job ^.^
XXPonyboyXXLoverXX
2006-10-24
ch 1,
abuse"YA CAN'T CATCH ME, I'M THE GINGERBREAD MAN," Two-Bit yelled, holding up a ginger bread man he had just gotten, running around waving it above his head and shrieking with glee.

ME TO! Im a gingerbread man with Two-bit! This was really cute! I think you should turn it into a story instead of a one-shot, but it is a really cute/good one-shot and is fine as one, but it would be cute as a story to...haha Poor Darry.
ThatWeasley
2006-10-24
ch 1,
abuseIt's an alright story.
But, I think you could make it better, if you put a little more effort into it.

You should try to put more detail and length into it.
xodamhsoirxo
2006-10-24
ch 1,
abusehehe that sent me into a fit of giggles, I can picture all of them being bitty. :P

you're so right about 7 year olds not talking like babies! I think people spend too much time with people their age and under-estimate little kids way too much.

great story!
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