Nice!

My Review:

Chapter 1:
I doubt this one. Hiruma aren't that romantic, or sweet, but.. I like this story. It's fun to read, although its a bit strange to have Hiruma like this.. hahaha.. ^^'

Chapter 2:
Well, I like this story more than the chapter 1. But it's too short, although its good.. :)


YA-HA!

and the team goes *faint*
*musashi is like -_- bout time*
lolz

...Hiruma really sounds drunk at the end...

That's so romantic!

so cool! ^_^
love it!

I loved both stories.

“See something interesting?”

yes I see something interesting and its your fic that I see. XD

this is realy great work. I like your style and the way you show the characters - so please go on - it's so cute

Aw...Hiruma's a softie after all...You really should continue this, cause it's really good. ^^

You are writing more, I hope? 'Tis lovely work.

can you continue d story... it feels so short...
make it a llittle longer... its really interesting n nice

aw!! thats so cute! u need to write more stories like this!

Aw! ^_^ I

i love it!! please continue making fanfictions!