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| 72669 2008-06-26 ch 2, | abuse...Hiruma really sounds drunk at the end... |
| speed and write 2008-06-15 ch 2, | abuseThat's so romantic! |
| xieloinfehrnurom 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuseso cool! ^_^ love it! |
| Miroki-chan 2007-12-16 ch 2, | abuseI loved both stories. |
| rhoeheim 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuse“See something interesting?” yes I see something interesting and its your fic that I see. XD |
| naoko 2007-07-22 ch 2, anon. | abusethis is realy great work. I like your style and the way you show the characters - so please go on - it's so cute |
| 1010'jin 2007-01-22 ch 2, | abuseAw...Hiruma's a softie after all...You really should continue this, cause it's really good. ^^ |
| Kantama 2007-01-08 ch 2, | abuseYou are writing more, I hope? 'Tis lovely work. |
| yao 2006-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abusecan you continue d story... it feels so short... make it a llittle longer... its really interesting n nice |
| charms 2006-11-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseaw!! thats so cute! u need to write more stories like this! |
| Cryptic Innocence 2006-11-05 ch 2, | abuseAw! ^_^ I |
| school_girl 2006-10-31 ch 2, anon. | abusei love it!! please continue making fanfictions! |
| Os.Hoshi 2006-10-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseKekeke! Fics like this make me laugh.. XD Really liked the 1st chap! That's pretty much how I imagine Yoi to kinda make his "approach." Not sure about ch.2 cuz, well...we're not there yet XD I know it's hard to resist, tho, LOL! |
| kitkatattack 2006-10-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseHm...well, I like the beginning and the end, but I don't think Mamori would be that impulsive because that's not her style. I think she'd work it slow so she wouldn't freak him out. Good job though. |
| Dozen and One Stars 2006-10-25 ch 2, | abuseAh young love. It was nice to see Mamori take the initiative for their first kiss. Shiort but to the point I liked it a lot. I wish to see more by you and until then keep up the great work. |