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72669
2008-06-26
ch 2,
abuse...Hiruma really sounds drunk at the end...
speed and write
2008-06-15
ch 2,
abuseThat's so romantic!
xieloinfehrnurom
2008-05-15
ch 2,
abuseso cool! ^_^
love it!
Miroki-chan
2007-12-16
ch 2,
abuseI loved both stories.
rhoeheim
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abuse“See something interesting?”

yes I see something interesting and its your fic that I see. XD
naoko
2007-07-22
ch 2, anon.
abusethis is realy great work. I like your style and the way you show the characters - so please go on - it's so cute
1010'jin
2007-01-22
ch 2,
abuseAw...Hiruma's a softie after all...You really should continue this, cause it's really good. ^^
Kantama
2007-01-08
ch 2,
abuseYou are writing more, I hope? 'Tis lovely work.
yao
2006-12-25
ch 1, anon.
abusecan you continue d story... it feels so short...
make it a llittle longer... its really interesting n nice
charms
2006-11-08
ch 2, anon.
abuseaw!! thats so cute! u need to write more stories like this!
Cryptic Innocence
2006-11-05
ch 2,
abuseAw! ^_^ I
school_girl
2006-10-31
ch 2, anon.
abusei love it!! please continue making fanfictions!
Os.Hoshi
2006-10-29
ch 2, anon.
abuseKekeke! Fics like this make me laugh.. XD

Really liked the 1st chap! That's pretty much how I imagine Yoi to kinda make his "approach." Not sure about ch.2 cuz, well...we're not there yet XD I know it's hard to resist, tho, LOL!
kitkatattack
2006-10-28
ch 2, anon.
abuseHm...well, I like the beginning and the end, but I don't think Mamori would be that impulsive because that's not her style. I think she'd work it slow so she wouldn't freak him out. Good job though.
Dozen and One Stars
2006-10-25
ch 2,
abuseAh young love. It was nice to see Mamori take the initiative for their first kiss. Shiort but to the point I liked it a lot. I wish to see more by you and until then keep up the great work.
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