 SlippingSanity 2007-03-30 . chapter 1This is so good! When I read this I just had to tell my sister about this fanfic and then we started looking at the different scenes in which chaos was there to help out Jr.. This is definately a good fanfic! |
 PerfectCell17 2006-12-06 . chapter 1Aw, that was great... Poor Rubedo... |
 Kit 2006-11-10 . chapter 1 Ah, I'm so glad someone else likes the same pairing! I've been looking for a c/jr fic for a while, and this one is perfect.
Wonderfully written, and cute! :D |
 Moonstone 2006-10-26 . chapter 1 I'm really not a chaos x Jr fan, but this was cute. ^-^ |
 G-Anakin13 2006-10-25 . chapter 1Cool! |
 Ariadne The Alchemist 2006-10-25 . chapter 1That was so sweet and sad!! Aww... I just wanna scoop Jr. up and cuddle him... but he probably wouldn't like that. ^^; My favorite line was, "If Albedo were awake, he'd probably be laughing at him." Hehe, rather funny, but quite true as well.
Just one question: Didn't Jr. and chaos technically meet during the Miltia incident? It doesn't matter too much, it's still really good and believable, I'm just throwing that out there. ^.^
*favs*
P.S. It'd be awesome if you decided to make this into a multi-chapter ^^ But if you don't, that's cool too. |
 Lady Eos 2006-10-25 . chapter 1Aww, how cute. This would actually make a great storyline if you ever decide to continue and change it from a one-shot. I really like it. Good job! ^_^ |
 Lucrecia LeVrai 2006-10-25 . chapter 1That was such a sweet and amusing drabble, I admit I loved it, even though I'm technically not a fan of any of these pairings. I think you've got a really nice, flowing writing style. And I liked the way you kept everything simple and subtle, without exaggerating Jr.'s emotions. Well done! |