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SlippingSanity
2007-03-30 . chapter 1
This is so good! When I read this I just had to tell my sister about this fanfic and then we started looking at the different scenes in which chaos was there to help out Jr.. This is definately a good fanfic!
PerfectCell17
2006-12-06 . chapter 1
Aw, that was great... Poor Rubedo...
Kit
2006-11-10 . chapter 1
Ah, I'm so glad someone else likes the same pairing! I've been looking for a c/jr fic for a while, and this one is perfect.
Wonderfully written, and cute! :D
Moonstone
2006-10-26 . chapter 1
I'm really not a chaos x Jr fan, but this was cute. ^-^
G-Anakin13
2006-10-25 . chapter 1
Cool!
Ariadne The Alchemist
2006-10-25 . chapter 1
That was so sweet and sad!! Aww... I just wanna scoop Jr. up and cuddle him... but he probably wouldn't like that. ^^; My favorite line was, "If Albedo were awake, he'd probably be laughing at him." Hehe, rather funny, but quite true as well.

Just one question: Didn't Jr. and chaos technically meet during the Miltia incident? It doesn't matter too much, it's still really good and believable, I'm just throwing that out there. ^.^

*favs*

P.S. It'd be awesome if you decided to make this into a multi-chapter ^^ But if you don't, that's cool too.
Lady Eos
2006-10-25 . chapter 1
Aww, how cute. This would actually make a great storyline if you ever decide to continue and change it from a one-shot. I really like it. Good job! ^_^
Lucrecia LeVrai
2006-10-25 . chapter 1
That was such a sweet and amusing drabble, I admit I loved it, even though I'm technically not a fan of any of these pairings. I think you've got a really nice, flowing writing style. And I liked the way you kept everything simple and subtle, without exaggerating Jr.'s emotions. Well done!
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