Very good, even with the overused plot.
The suspense is enough to bring in almost anyone.

I agree with sonic4life, this story had me at the edge of my seat just wanting to know what would happen next, please continue because this story seems very interesting.

This is a very great story! It's just the beginning, and I'm already at the edge of my seat!

Awesome story! I like the amnesia thing you put in. I cant wait for the next chapter.

This is cool. The story begins in a very strange situation, i like it! Strange, my mind tells me that i saw a movie or read a book that had the beginning of the story like your story... Hm can't remember...
Anyway i think this is gonna rock.
Continue!