NICE!

Very interesting story!

Poor Yamcha. You always got the sense that he was dating different girls all the time but it would still be hard to see your friends settle down and have families. I enjoyed this story and it is one of those that make me want to write and/or read about Yamcha.

Omigaw... I'm so lost. Watt was it about anyway? Boring...

Humorous and entertaining though it was, it really was still quite depressing for poor Yamcha. But it was nice having that little reminisce with the original gang. And I'm glad that each person was well represented. Every bit made this into the wonderfully captivating story that it is. Well done.

Nice, fun story...It was definitely fun to see all the characters interacting

Nice story )

enjoyable and well written

"Yamcha glanced over at Goku cradling Chichi against his chest to Bulma snuggling contentedly into Vegeta’s side and sighed. “Like I got the consolation prize.” poor yamcha

btw, im impressed his story is good! i cant stop reading :)

cute if it's what you humans call it you should have let some drama go between v. and y. update soon

“I'm impressed,” Bulma said. “I can't leave marks on Vegeta; he’s too tense.” hehe. For some reason I thought that was really funny. I always sort of felt bad for Yamcha, but in GT you kinda get an idea that he's got a girlfriend or something like that. I can't really picture Yamcha alone at this point.

I gotta say I really enjoyed the story, mostly because I really like the way you write, however I can't quite see Vegeta/Bulma Goku/Chichi sharing a bonfire moment. Now that I think about it, I can't quite see Goku doing anything resembling romantic at all. He always had this almost chldish air of naivety (is that a word) about things like this. He never demonstrated much to Chichi in the anime at all. Not to say he didn't love her. I guess that's why I found the whole scene a little difficult to place in context.

If this is shortly before GT, then Chichi is supposed to be quite older. I guess it's good to see older women can still take care of the men...? I really thought Goku wasn't that interested in her anymore in GT...not that way either...but I guess, well, there's really no age for that right (grins)

aw, poor yamcha! this story had me rolling in laughter the whole way through! kudos for capturing the characters so well!

He couldn't have said it any better. That was really impressive writing. :)

The way you make that little details with everyone is wonderful!

(and lol with the ‘creative liberties’ xD)

Thanks :)

poor Yamcha. Poor, poor Yamcha. I really wish I could get around to writing a Yamcha-centric story, with him being the hero and saving the day but I just can't focus on it. He REALLY got the shaft throughout the entire series, EXCEPT in his first meeting with Goku. And then he only almost won because Goku was hungry! Really, you gotta pity the guy.