This was one of the most hilarious fics I've read in a long time. I was laughing out loud through the whole thing, when could catch my breath between squeeing over the twins as Samneric and Kyouya's crazy/sexy/evil vibe with a pistol pressed to the back of Tamaki's neck. OMG, so much fun! And so completely plausible! Renge is a woman after my own heart.

I've read a bunch of your other Ouran fics too, and I enjoyed them all, you've got beautiful prose and a really palpable grip on the characters--but this one was just so unusual and fantastic that I felt I had to leave a comment. You totally rock.

Love it! Tamaki and Haruhi... at the end XD Love it love it love it! Nekowaza and Kyoya... XD Keep writing!

awesome story, really funny. I loved your characterizations and the premise.

bwahahaha! This is awesome.
Was Nekozawa's reaction to having his hair shot off a reference to Spaceballs, by any chance?

Wonderfully hilarious.

dude, this was awesome >< and it would so fit in to the anime series as well : )

lol, i love the twins, that was so funny!!

God I love this story. I could list all the great scenes, but this review would end up far exceeding the chapter limit. So instead, all I can say is..wow.

One small quibble, I sometimes felt the characterizations were a bit off. For example, Tamaki and Nekozawa actually get along pretty well (in the manga at least), as compared to the slight animosity you give them. At the very least, Tamaki is incapable of holding a grudge.

Any any changes in characterizations can be blamed on the fact that they are acting... mostly.

Still a really good story. I love it.

kukukukukukukuku

*LOVE*

Oh, wow
Bravo

I so adored this story, and I just ate it up
Wow. . . . .
You don't even know how impressed I am
((and how much I enjoyed having Nekozawa in there cough cough. . . . .))
Really, I can't give you enough praise! ! ! ! !

Wow...just wow. I thoroughly enjoyed that story, and got so into it that i began imagining scenarios about how it would play out in between reading chapters..and wow, that was beyond awesome. i must've laughed about fifty times reading this, the dialogue is entertaining, and the characters are all perfectly written, and hikaoru (i like this word) were *perfect* [my favorite characters, you see]. My only complaint would be that I was starting to miss Tamaki for a few chapters, but when he made his reappearances he was simply lovely. Anyway...I've rambled enough, but I want to say that the ending was very sweet...hm, but i also wonder if you intentionally wrote 't's are dotted and i's crossed'...but knowing the fact that this was a fic about paintball of all things, and knowing your awesome sense of humor, it probably was. in any case, hats off to you.

this was a great story, i would love another story like this. do you take requests? if so can you make a nice long haruhi/mori story as well?

Whe!

This is amazing! It was so hilarious. I have never really thought about paintball like this before... but it was so amazing, and detailed, and perfect! I think my favourite parts were the twins at the beginning, and Haruhi when she's going against Ranka. Oh, and of course, Nekozawa.

Congrats on a job well done!

This really reads like a movie. It's that good.