This is the most wonderful fanfiction I've read so far, seriously. You made this story so meaningful and real which made me want to read everything without feeling bored at all.
It's really pure and I really got sucked in. Thank you for sharing this story.

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woah. thirteen year old and having a sexual encounter? wasn't even really..sexual. how you wrote, it was more of...a form of comfort. and so breathtaking to read. this whole story is breathtaking to real. emotions and pain tumbling over you in waves. please please please do resurface and update. UPDATE!

yes. yes yes yes yes yes. gaara has come back to hinata! YES! their link is so amazing. how hinata just blocks everything, and zooms on him. and they don't even talk when reunited. just latch on to each other and hold. AH! darn haishi. even if he arranges someone as badass as sasuke, won't like it at all! gaara and hinata! hinata and gaara! ...

sasuke to the rescue again...kind of. poor hinata. never really gets a break does she. sucky dad at home, pedifile teachers and vulgar teenage girls during school. aw. why did they have to split gaara and hinata!! WHY?!

eh. creapy teacher stalking poor hinata. thank god sasuke did come. hate comparing, but sasuke is kind of like gaara with the dark energy, not such a talker, and protecting hinata. even if it was once. but of course perfer gaara more. but gaara has the history, and seems less stable to me...that's why love him! :)
o.o how you write...its like you weaving in raw emotion through their actions and few words hinata or gaara ever utter. amazing.

the corners of my mouth were turning upward when reading of gaara and hinata meeting when little. gaara mad and hurt, hinata scared and unsure...but then when they held hands. *sigh* a little glimpse of happiness. and then the part about the mom wiped that feeling away. but reading his thoughs is so intrigueing.

Aw. gaara's like, no, IS her support. he's not even that kind, but sooths her nevertheless. but then when she was revealing her affections to naruto...ouch. wonder if gaara feels more than possesstion of hinata.

wow. how you wrote gaara, is so...twisted, but believable. he's there, but doesn't reveal himself that much. he not crazy, more..vague...i can't even describe it. lovely writing.

this whole story gives off a feeling of a dark stormy day right before a thunderstorm and a feeling of despair like the whole world is going to end, not the frightening type of despair, but one of sadness and hopelessness. who is she getting married off to? sasuke? someone else? are hinata and gaara going to flee? update asayc

wow.

wall of fire-something that will both protect her and destroy her. i love this story, i can feel every single bit of darkness in it. reminds me a little of francesca lia block. don't know if you ever read her stuff but you might like it, its one part ridiculous, sparkly fantasy and one part deepest and most wretched part of humanity's ugly soul.

no its interesting actually, that gaara wears his mother's perfume. scent is closely tied to memory. good story.

i do actually like the little lullaby it sounds like some old pagan poem of old.

I have to say ... WOW. I wonder though...
“I can’t help if I don’t know what hurts.” that lines great, he helped her with the whole virginity thing and he's sorta trying to tell her he'll always be there to HELP. hmm Am i right?

I don't know but I'm jealous, I can't write this good. Maybe i should listen to music while writing??
Maybe...

Great story though/ Intense and Dark. And i do love Gaara.

Yes, your lullaby was nice, complicated. This chapters are making me feel sorta... queasy? Dont know but the friendship is really something ... mysterious between gaara n hinata, Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hey ho! Lovin it actually