Is there more to come? It eel excellent

Nicely done. I think you did Jack very well. Thanks for posting.

-Ellie

this is fantastic! absolutely love it. :)

way cool.

luv it

-alisha x

great story! I love the whole thing going on between them. I wonder what he was thinging when they were so close like that

very well done...this was a different type of lisa/jackson story..

i enjoyed reading it immensely...hope to see more of your stories! you are a very talented writer.

I really liked this. Your interpretations of Jack and Lisa, if put in this situation, were spot-on. All in all, I enjoyed it thoroughly.

My only question: Why did he take the bobby pin?

Awesome! Absolutely fantasticly awesome! What a pearl, no diamond to find! :D

I'm all curled up and funny inside from all the sexual tension in this beautiful little story.

I hated that he left her! I wanted her SO much to run after him! I LOVED that he was so cool, and clamied to be such a professional, totally uninterested in revenge. That added such a differnet dimension to the story. Different from most others, (including my own I must blushingly admit).

It was PERFECT! This will be read and re-read several times, I promise you.

Wanders off to dream of Jackson... in an NY alley...

Nic.

Really, really great- the perfect Red Eye oneshot! I loved the suspense and sexual tension. Characterizations were excellent, and (in my opinion) a fantastic ending. Jackson being out there, still doing his job without flaw... a great way to end it.

As you can tell I really enjoyed it- thanks for being so entertaining! It definitely livened up a dull night :)

Loved it. I loved Jack's smugness when he mentioned he could find her whenever he wanted to. I thought the way you wrote Lisa's thoughts about Jackson not really having a place to live was right on the money. I, of course, also loved the alley scene. I really hope you turn this into a full story, because I thought you had them so perfectly in character. I also think it'd be interesting to continue since you have Jack doing other jobs without using Lisa. I don't see that very often, and I think it'd be interesting to see their "relationship" progress while he's still murdering.

Awesome job.

all i can say is this: it better not be a damned one-shot

A I really liked that. You did a good job with the chemistry between Lisa and Jackson.

This was SO GOOD. Omg. I loved "Red Eye", and even though it makes me twisted, I kinda-sorta like Lisa/Jackson, and felt that their relationship is so twisted - which you showed very expertly in this story. I hope this isn't a oneshot, though if its alright if it is, but seriously, its so good I definitely wouldn't mind reading more, especially more of what-happens-next. Good luck!

Gorgeous, gorgeous one shot, Syrinx, beautifully written with witty, easy dialogue. AND Jackson in a leather jacket. Congratulations!