|Reviews for Old Scars|
| Mockingbelles 7/14/10 . chapter 1
Is there more to come? It eel excellent
| Elliesmeow 1/16/10 . chapter 1
Nicely done. I think you did Jack very well. Thanks for posting.
| madscott 10/24/08 . chapter 1
this is fantastic! absolutely love it. :)
| Anna McNarin 4/7/08 . chapter 1
| alisha 5/15/07 . chapter 1
| FluidDegree 4/2/07 . chapter 1
great story! I love the whole thing going on between them. I wonder what he was thinging when they were so close like that
| secrets09 3/31/07 . chapter 1
very well done...this was a different type of lisa/jackson story..
i enjoyed reading it immensely...hope to see more of your stories! you are a very talented writer.
| Cortney 12/13/06 . chapter 1
I really liked this. Your interpretations of Jack and Lisa, if put in this situation, were spot-on. All in all, I enjoyed it thoroughly.
My only question: Why did he take the bobby pin?
| NicolinaN 12/11/06 . chapter 1
Awesome! Absolutely fantasticly awesome! What a pearl, no diamond to find! :D
I'm all curled up and funny inside from all the sexual tension in this beautiful little story.
I hated that he left her! I wanted her SO much to run after him! I LOVED that he was so cool, and clamied to be such a professional, totally uninterested in revenge. That added such a differnet dimension to the story. Different from most others, (including my own I must blushingly admit).
It was PERFECT! This will be read and re-read several times, I promise you.
Wanders off to dream of Jackson... in an NY alley...
| SleepingNadine 11/23/06 . chapter 1
Really, really great- the perfect Red Eye oneshot! I loved the suspense and sexual tension. Characterizations were excellent, and (in my opinion) a fantastic ending. Jackson being out there, still doing his job without flaw... a great way to end it.
As you can tell I really enjoyed it- thanks for being so entertaining! It definitely livened up a dull night :)
| LizzyPop 11/18/06 . chapter 1
Loved it. I loved Jack's smugness when he mentioned he could find her whenever he wanted to. I thought the way you wrote Lisa's thoughts about Jackson not really having a place to live was right on the money. I, of course, also loved the alley scene. I really hope you turn this into a full story, because I thought you had them so perfectly in character. I also think it'd be interesting to continue since you have Jack doing other jobs without using Lisa. I don't see that very often, and I think it'd be interesting to see their "relationship" progress while he's still murdering.
| CaryFairy 11/1/06 . chapter 1
all i can say is this: it better not be a damned one-shot
| star 10/27/06 . chapter 1
A I really liked that. You did a good job with the chemistry between Lisa and Jackson.
| inappropriate laughter 10/27/06 . chapter 1
This was SO GOOD. Omg. I loved "Red Eye", and even though it makes me twisted, I kinda-sorta like Lisa/Jackson, and felt that their relationship is so twisted - which you showed very expertly in this story. I hope this isn't a oneshot, though if its alright if it is, but seriously, its so good I definitely wouldn't mind reading more, especially more of what-happens-next. Good luck!
| Zzee 10/27/06 . chapter 1
Gorgeous, gorgeous one shot, Syrinx, beautifully written with witty, easy dialogue. AND Jackson in a leather jacket. Congratulations!