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1qwerty
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
Unreal
SuperiorShortness
2009-10-02 . chapter 1
Fun...
Vilkath
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
Interesting like all of this series works, though I think it falls into the same problem as the 'Fight for Life' Ranma cross over series. That being much of the middle and the end is written while the orginal story and such are still incomplete. It's not a bad series to be sure but it would be much better if it was built on the foundation of a complete work, instead of sequals upon sequals of incomplete stuff.

I like the idea of wizards in space, it's always been one my favorite HP cross over plots. Usualy done in HP/Stargate fics but this isn't bad either. I also like the idea of the Potter house, it gives some hints Harry might at least dallied with women enough to sire a family, considering he was the last of the Potters. Not that I expect this Harry to madly fall in love with some one or have some deep family related loyalty but thus far Harry has almost come off as a-sexual.
Michael01
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
more, more, more, more more!! please im dying 2 know what happens!!
geniosity
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
i like your story
please update soon
The-Resident
2007-12-29 . chapter 1
Well, Part 2 of the Perception Series. Well done in a single chapter. You should mark it as completed though, even if the series isn't. Also, you seem to have a small spelling problem... where for were (not all the time, but in all 3 of the perception series). Also misspelling Centauri by transposing the 'a' and 'u', also misspelling Disapparate. There are on-line references for Babylon 5 as well as Harry Potter with the proper spellings. I often use them when editing. There were few other misspellings, but I can't call them to mind right now.

I am really enjoying the series and seeing how you are slowly taking Harry darker and darker has been quite interesting. Keep up the good work.
Dreakon
2007-12-13 . chapter 1
This entire chapter made me as giddy as a pre-schooler on a sugar high. I can only imagine what kind of havoc a wizard-dominated humanity can inflict on this galaxy.

I'm sorry if my review didn't exactly provide you with any helpful criticism. To be fair about it look at it this way; if I'm not criticising you that probably means I haven't found anything of note to critique.
Since I'm Dutch and english isn't my native language, let me say it in a way that I'm sure I won't botch up.
Good writing. Great story.
FrequencyQueen
2007-10-05 . chapter 1
Great story!
Darak
2007-10-05 . chapter 1
Quite the interesting fiction you have there.

I don't know why but this fiction makes me think of "the Excalibur Alternative" from Baen Books.

Where did your praestantia concept come from? Was it inspire from the Vampire RPG?
M01
2007-07-03 . chapter 1
Wow i like it alot! Please update!
pill
2007-05-01 . chapter 1
Please write more to this story thanks.
Lord Nott
2007-01-20 . chapter 1
love the story
RainSeaker
2006-12-06 . chapter 1
VERY nice. I would have to say mighty confusing as I didn't understand what you were really tring to say most of the time, but I got the general gist of it and it was very good! I would love to see you write more *hint hint*! ~Rain~
Hackett
2006-12-02 . chapter 1
amazing
ApocSM
2006-11-17 . chapter 1
I love this story! Please update soon, I would love to see what happens, after all, all I know is what your other story says, you know the one about Xander dressing up as Harry for Halloween. Anyway, it would be cool to see what happens, and also what would happen if Harry did not get transported into the BtVS universe. Update soon!!
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