I don't get why this hasn't gotten any more reviews -- it's awesome.
You used great detail, and I thought it was sweet -- but not overly sweet, which is good, because Jay doesn't really strike me as the fluff type.
Loved it. ;D

awesome! ur great at sensory details and painting the image of it all.

Great Job! I like the premise of it. I thought it was interesting how you transitioned Ellie's relationship from Craig to Jay. I also love the feeling of mystery this oneshot had. Although we have no clue how Ellie and Jay got together, we can still tell they have feelings for each other. I really enjoy reading about the Jay/Ellie/Craig love triangle. The only thing I would have reccommended is to mention Manny somehow, and the state of Craig and Manny's relationship at this time. I can see why you left that out, however. It's just a minor forgotten detail I suppose.

Great job, though!