|Reviews for Imaginary Phantoms?|
| Inviso-Al 5/21/13 . chapter 7
| TheDranx 4/21/12 . chapter 1
The only thing I have to critic is emotion. None of the characters show it.
Dani gets suck: She should yell, scream, panic, or be generally upset that she was in a bind.
When someone is suppose to be curious, make them curious. Angry? Scream in rage if you have to get their feelings across! It's all very bland without EMOTION!
It's all extremely boring other wise. Good story but it could be better, even great, with the the characters show some form of life when action is taken upon them/by them.
That is all.
| Battosailover5 10/3/10 . chapter 2
Never have I heard of such a ridiculous crossover
| Elena Forest 8/21/09 . chapter 1
:) U have a really good plot but you dont put periods or exclamition points at the ends of sentances. :D I can't wait to read more!
| kittyore9 2/16/09 . chapter 7
| Shuricel 8/3/07 . chapter 7
Your idea is fairly good, but I'm confused about a few things. Wouldn't it have been simpler for them if they just flew out after they saw the agents?
| ghostanimal 11/21/06 . chapter 7
| Queen S of Randomness 016 11/21/06 . chapter 7
hey! awesome ending! i luved it! :D
| Queen S of Randomness 016 11/18/06 . chapter 6
this was an AWESOME chapter! I HOPE U UPDATE SOON! :D
| ghostanimal 11/18/06 . chapter 6
lol what's gonna happen?
| Skyline13 11/18/06 . chapter 6
this was a good chapter! i have nothing else to say, so keep up the good work!
| Queen S of Randomness 016 11/15/06 . chapter 5
awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! :D
| Cylon One 11/15/06 . chapter 5
My interest in this little adventure continues to remain high. I knew somebody sooner or later would start to suspect something about the two Ds and the two GIW. I would agree that Goo would be a logical choice to have help in telling who's imaginary and who's not.
| Chachi-chama 11/10/06 . chapter 4
awesome story...the guys in white are kinda stupid though, they could just adopt danny and dani instead of getting disguised as aliens...oh well, plz update soon!
| Cylon One 11/10/06 . chapter 4
Can't imagine this being any better.