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| Space1Traveler 2008-03-20 ch 6, | abuseI never figured it out. I thought it was Aiden for a long time. The 'bug' being Sheppard wasn't easy either. I had to wait until the box. You made me cry with the burial and the final cave scene. Good story. It was well worth your effort. Thanks. |
| Pauline 2008-03-18 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis is such a great story. I love the detailed plot and you really had me stumped as to who the 'bad guys' could possibly be. The whumpage was excellent and Rodney's reaction to the possible 'contagion' was hilarious. You have a wonderful way of capturing the true inner workings of the characters and their interactions to situations and each other without going overboard. Another great story. |
| Alleonh 2008-02-16 ch 6, | abusewow... I could go into a huge description of my opinion of this fic, but I think I'm going to sum it all up with a simple and heart felt: That was a damn good story. I also have two compliments to add, just to give you warm and fuzzies. number 1: I actually signed in to review. That's actually saying a lot. number 2: I really really wish this would be made into an episode of SGA. It would have made a great one, and in my opinion, is a much better time travel tale then the one SG1 spun. So there you go, you're a better episode writer than the one's who are getting paid to do it ^_^ |
| puddles1311 2008-02-15 ch 6, | abuseWow. I've wanted to read this story for forever, and I finally got to do it! Awesome and fantastic job! I had some inklings in the beginning that the old guy was Rodney, but then I completely forgot about them by the time it was revealed. Just an awesome story all around. |
| Ditzyleo 2008-02-05 ch 6, | abuseRL has finally allowed me time to read this (well actually it hasn't but i have decided RL needs to take a runing jump just now)and it is FAB! It has everything you could possibly want in a ff! Truely great writing- thank you! |
| The Love of a Lie 2007-11-13 ch 6, | abuseOh my god that was so sad! SNIFF...Great story though! |
| MarbleGlove 2007-10-31 ch 6, | abuseHappy Halloween! This was a very good story, and decidedly creepy. And sad and scary and just very, very good. I had wondered about Old Rodney fairly early on (which just goes to show that you have Rodney's voice dead-on), but hadn't figured out the creature until the big reveal. And excellent Halloween story. Thanks for posting. |
| imloopy 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseIt's always reassuring, when starting to read a long story, to know that the writer writes well and you're in safe hands. I'm curious. Who is the guy? What is this beast? And why was he digging, and so far from the place he calls home. I guess you've thoroughly whetted my appetite and got me curious, so I'd better get reading again :-) |
| Stargate Groupie 2007-10-05 ch 6, | abuseThis story was amazing! I just found it and ended up staying up half the night to finish it! It had everything you could want in a great tale, a twisty mystery, character whumping, friendship, drama, humour and the build-up to the end was intense. You really had Sheppard and McKay’s characters nailed and your writing was powerful. Thanks for this fantastic ride! |
| Cybersyd 2007-08-04 ch 6, | abuseFantastic story! One of the best fics I've read in a very long time. It's a genius idea, and beautifully written, full of tragedy and drama and humour and all the things which make a story memorable. It will stick in my mind for a long time to come. Thank you for writing it. |
| 001ElvenWarrior 2007-07-19 ch 6, | abuseOh. My. Goodness. That was incredible! To say this has been a pleasure to read is an understatement and the way you set it up was awesome! It had to be hard to rewrite as much as you did, but your hard work certainly produced an incredible story. This is definitely one of my favorites, and is so well written it puts a lot of other fanfic to shame. (And this would be so awesome if it were an actual episode!) I absolutely loved it! Thanks for your hard work and dedication to this story...and rather than think of it as late - consider it early for this year's Halloween. XD I look forward to seeing what else you plan for this year's Halloween, above and beyond your own usual writings. You definitely earned my respect. |
| b7-kerravon 2007-07-17 ch 6, | abuseOh, THAT was worth waiting for! Thank you so much for another fabulous story! |
| b7-kerravon 2007-07-17 ch 4, | abuseOh, yes. Definitely marvelous. Iratus bug, eh? Next chappie now... |
| b7-kerravon 2007-07-17 ch 2, | abuseYes, yes, yes! I had given up on ever seeing this finished! It's not Halloween, it's Christmas! Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!~ |
| Astraldust 2007-07-16 ch 6, | abuseWonderful story and truly enjoyable from beginning to end. Thank you. |