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| DoThePieFace 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseHey, I really like this. You wrote the reactions and stuff really well, in my opinion anyway. I thought I'd review one of your stories seeing as you took the time to review mine. I can picture that happening in the animation format and stuff lol. Anyway, hope to hear from you soon. DoThePieFace |
| Bizzy 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abusePoor Al. That was so sad, and yet so well done. You don't get to see Al's reaction, and somehow my mind completely missed that he wouldn't even remember that Ed had automail. Very well done! Keep writing |
| Henrika 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Some minor grammar and spelling errors throughout the piece. I kind of liked having Riza be the one who could start helping Al out a little bit, beyond Winry and Granny. Nicely done. Keep writing! |