I only have a few problems with this.
in 13 you had Chun Li and Cammie get knocked out
By Ukyo.

The truth of the matter is Both Chun Li and Cammie are highly trained martial artist and they would not have gone done so easily.

With that aside the story is still good, and I hope that you can keep writing this.

Until next time.
Kidan Out!

ok one, i think you need to add more details, and two the sound effects aare unnecessary

well just to let you know Kasumi is spposed to be 19 years old but it's a good stroy so far

The dialogue for at least half of this chapter is like an 80's cartoon show. It's really cheesy and somewhat cliché, even if some of the events described are a whole lot darker than what they would show in an 80's show, cartoon or not.

How are the Amazons tracking a flying person so well and so quickly, anyway?

Not bad

A most excellent fanfic. Party on dude.

Good work! sorry it took me so long to review! Keep on Keepin' On!

Nice freakin fanfic.

Good goin, Dean. Keep on keepin on.

Thank you for not killing or crippling Kasumi because she adds a lighter side to that dark and bloody parts of the story. Hope that Ryoga makes a entrance becasue big BOOM is his entrance.

Rather strange seeing Gosunkugi with so much power. Carry on.

I knew it! I knew Kasumi wouldn't die. Had eveybody going there for a moment.

*cheer*

Yay and wow