 Phantom Quill 8/29/03 . chapter 1Good story. Write more! |
 Meliantha 5/30/02 . chapter 1Ah...there's a section in the middle that's a bit messed up. You might want to think of reuploading this story. Anyway, I liked this story much-much. I particularly liked the last line, and the part where Remus dropped Lockhart's baggage on the floor. Keep up the good work! |
 Tess3 4/14/02 . chapter 1I loved this story. I loved the dialogue between Lockhart and Lupin, I loved their interactions, and I loved the writing. Plus anyone who writes a Welsh!Lupin will win my heart instantly. It was just really, really well-done. The context didn't really need much explaining, I thought. I dunno. I really liked the story and will check out the rest of your work. "Pity Lupin didn't eat you and get it over with.*snickers* Marvellous! |
 Rage Point 2/20/02 . chapter 1Very cute fic, Raiden! Except for a strange cut in the text that seems to be the result of upload troubles, I very much enjoyed this! Grabbed the link for this on a recommendation from one Episcopal Witch I just couldn't resist the temptation for a look at Lockhart and Lupin in the same time, same place. Lupin certainly DOES run rings around Lockhart the man's head seems to be entirely composed of fluff, where Lupin, on the other hand, is a subtle sharpwit. Not bad for a pointless story that goes absolutely nowhere, not bad at all! |
 Hellrabbit 2/7/02 . chapter 1EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *Bounces off the walls* WRITE MORE! CONTINUE! NOW! |
 Twinnie 12/26/01 . chapter 1*grin* like it... I'd never seen that kind of story, and find it very interesting. And it's well written, too. The passage about the pixies is *chuckles* especially appealing p*wonders why on earth Dumbledore would ask Lockhart to join in* Oh yeah, guess he needed him to ask some other wizards to join the guys fighting against Voldie *snort* dunno what he would need him for otherwise... What, the man isn't even able to recognize a Dark Creature ! |
 Aurianna Parker 11/20/01 . chapter 1like all of your stories, this is very well written. You might want to edit a little,
there's this part in the middle where the entire story starts over a couple times
and it's pretty confusing. Other than that wonderful. The interaction between
Lupin and Lockhart is inspired. I loved it. |
 Lumendea 9/27/01 . chapter 1HAAAAAAA! Lockhart deserved that! Funny! |
 Episcopal Witch 6/6/01 . chapter 1Lockhart and Lupin together! I love it! Not a cliche I've never found anything like this before. And they were both so themselves. I see you haven't posted any stories for about a year. How about a sequel to this one? |
 Sirius Lupin 11/18/00 . chapter 1Hi this was a great story great work Write more!1 |
 grr 9/21/00 . chapter 1 i WISH you'd write more! of anything! you do lupin particularly well and he's my favorite. |
 Doctor Finkelstein 9/2/00 . chapter 1 ::laughs Oh goodness, that was lovely! |
 RavenNat 8/30/00 . chapter 1 LOL! What a classic last line! It's so perfect. My face hurts from smiling) |
 Juliana 8/25/00 . chapter 1 "He didn't seem at all claustrophobic to me.*giggle* That was very cute. A fun read. |
 Trinity Day 8/20/00 . chapter 1Even though this was "pointless(your word, not mine) I really enjoyed it. I also liked watching Remus run circles around Lockhart. I love the interaction between the two of them. |