Such a sad story, and a good way of capturing Clark Kent's emotional state after the death of Jonathan. I've been a big Clark/Lana shipper as much as I've been a Lois and Clark guy, and how you portrayed Lana as actually accepting Clark after he told her the truth about everything: Krypton, his powers, and his Kryptoninan heritage. How you did it was very good and with Lana in character, it was so sad on Smallville seeing her and Clark no longer in love, I felt that Lana wouldn't have rejected Clark if he told her the truth about himself sooner.