*jaws open* T-this story... So nice... and and... Its so perfect!

OMG! A ChiakixMaron that's -not- incredibly, disgustingly sappy and dumb!:gaspinshock I really liked how you got into Maron's head, especially near the end. It was too perfect to describe! Keep up the good work!

aww!

Yaaa! this is so cute. But when did they move in together? is this after the show? Magna? which? Oh well, either way, it's still lovely.

Bye

Mel

3 It was so kawaii! I love how you made a poem/song to go with your fic! It was so romantic!

That was so *sweet* , and *beautiful* , and ... what else is there to say?

I did not realize the source of the song when i read this the first time.

That is so sweet and the sond really goes along with it.

ps Tokyo babylon rules

That's simply beautiful! one can really relate to how Maron feels about chiaki.

Please, write more like that!

LOVE IT! Not much more to say about it...*smiles*

*sniff* That was so beautiful! I loved it!Ducky

And it was worth the wait. Very sweet. Very well written. I like the balance of strength and fragility that you've highlighted in Maron. Keep writing.

That was soooooo good who is the song by? you probly have it somewhere on here I just can not find it it is really really good! hehe keep up the great work ja ne!

What a beautiful song and the fic fits them perfectly.

It just shows Maron's inner thoughts perfectly in my opinion. It was a good short. Now I'm curious about the song too. . Who is it by and is DejaVu the title?

Great fic. (And no I'm not just saying that because generally people get GOOD reviews, you actually more than earned it.)

Lovely... but I'm a romantic. I wish she'd love and need him as much as he loves and needs her. It is marvelous that she can stand on her own, though, but it almost seems like fractured love. Oh dear... *sniffle!

WAI! Beautiful! I'm not really a big fan of song fics, but this one is good. I like how you reaffirm Maron's strength. It's one of the things I love about her.