Wow. I'm taken aback by this story. This is probably the single story that I haven't read of yours yet, and I will now give myself a facepalm for not doing so. *facepalm*

Thanks, you got me in trouble for screaming HOLY S**T! :P I was suspecting it about half-way through, but I wasn't totally sure. I wasn't sure what to think. But I could tell when he was pulling the toy out what was going to happen.

Again, wonderful story. Keep on writing!

Wow.. This was so cute.
Really, it was really creative of you!
I REALLY liked this story.
Congrats, great fic!








...still, I didn't read about a kiss. WHERE IS THE KISS?! I NEED THE KISS!

Dude, you rock! I love the idea of Ash and May meeting years before they actually "meet"! And I think it's awesome how this story was inspired by the same thing happening to you and your girlfriend! Keep up the great work!

AMAZING
10/5 stars
This was the best advanceshipping story ever written
I did not see that coming(May being Shuppet)
Kind of ironic how that happened to you

Brilliant. Simply brilliant. The backstory was incredibly interesting and attention-grabbing, and the plot twist... I truly did not expect that! So, yeah, that's it! Perfect score!

That is a very romantic story. If there was a rating here like in youtube it'd be 5 stars all over. And thanks for the Advanceshipping stories. Good fortunes to you and your girlfriend, mate!

LOL! I wonder what made Max turn 'evil' (a.k.a. bratty)

Wow, that was amazing. I sorta thought it was May with the Shuppet, and Professor Oak mentioning Hoenn, but I wasn't sure. I love all of you stories, they're all excellent.

Whoa! This fic is so cool! Man, I like your style bro. This fic and your story reminds me of meeting my girlfriend in an anime convention about 5 years before we met and got together.. I distinctly remember what she wore back then... Hehe..

You rock dude!

-RV21

pretty much up until may took the half of the politoad toy out of her pack, i'd actally thought that shuppet was Max. ah well, i was close! same family, anyway...

Wow. Great story, your writing is amazing. Awesome work.

that was so frickin sweet!XD
For some reason, i kinda knew from the start that the shuppet was may XD Yey! i was right!

aw so cute i loved it

That's really well written! And very cute! I love it, keep up the good work!

This was so good! It's so interesting that this happened to you and your girlfriend. Like I've said in my reviews for May's crush, you're a good writer!