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| Matteic 2008-08-25 ch 11,  | abuseIt's too sad to me... :'-( |
| chiclete 2008-01-23 ch 11, | abuseSad...sniff! :( |
| Of The Moment 2007-06-27 ch 11, | abuse*Applauds* Great story, beautifully written. Tick is by far the coolest character. Though I do love Chase. I can't wait to read your next one!! -Kat |
| Radon65 2006-12-19 ch 11, | abuseWow. Another really well-written story. I loved Tick - he was a real friend and a cool guy. I also loved the part where House broke Wilson's mirror and then said that it was a health hazard - it was just like something that they'd do on the show. The ending was bittersweet. At least Chase is fairly happy, but as you said in one of your author's notes that you were tired of screwing over Chase, I'm tired of reading about it. You make me feel bad for him. I'm also displeased about Det. Meneldur, but I like the way you said that she would live forever through Chase. Enough with the critism, it was still awesome. I'll read the third story. |
| quack675 2006-11-11 ch 11, | abuseI love this story. Tick is one of the best fan-fiction realm characters ever! |
| Lerrinus 2006-11-09 ch 11, | abuse*applause* Right on! Sorry to hear about the death of the detective but Ron and Dr. Kendler got what they deserved so that's good. As for Chase, well, I have to say you were very realistic about the whole thing, brilliant writing! :-) |
| Lerrinus 2006-11-09 ch 10, | abuseIt's sad about the damage to his hand, will he ever be the same? *sigh* :-) |
| Falcon Whitaker 2006-11-07 ch 11, | abuseIt's almost one in the morning here, and I just stayed up from about five past midnight just to read this. I cannot put into words how wonderful I found this and 'Programming'. 5 star work and this ending is real closure on the story. On another note, I have the whole "Chase Torture Complex" too, lol. |
| Aqua Mage 2006-11-07 ch 11, | abuseHeartbreaking, but realistic ending, very true to the rest of the story. I really enjoyed this - I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your work... |
| fluffy2001 2006-11-05 ch 11, | abuseBravo Jenniffer! Thanks for doing this one. Yep, the bittersweet ending which was the proper way to go. The only thing I would have liked to have seen is how the team went on without him (in a few sentences) and if Chase kept touch, plus maybe House's role in his recovery, otherwise it was a very fitting and realistic ending. I liked this story better than its predecessor. Probably because I loved the mental health stuff. I'll be waiting now for your next non-torture fic. Make it happy and fun! |
| fluffy2001 2006-11-05 ch 10, | abuseThe thing that I loved about this chapter and thought was perfectly done was Chase's despondent state. I felt it and that was exactly how he should be after all he had been through. Oh, I feel a sad ending coming. That's okay, it feels exactly right. This was yet another perfect chapter and powerful emotionally. |
| fluffy2001 2006-11-05 ch 9, | abusePlaying catch up after my weekend away from fanfic. Wow, that's all I can say. Fantastic chapter. And you were worried. The dream sequence was sheer perfection. Also, House's realization of how screwed Chase is was great. Onto Chapter 10! |
| Merlin71 2006-11-05 ch 11, | abuseAw. Bitter sweet ending indeed, but perfect for this story. Thanks for sharing it. Now I hope to see you write some happy Chase fic, so you'll feel better. And I know you'll do a great job of that as well. Which is to say, I hope you write another story soon! :D |
| Dru 2006-11-05 ch 11, | abuseAw that was great...happt ending! *snuggles Chase* My poor dear woobie...great fic! |
| Firetop 2006-11-05 ch 11, | abuseSimply Amazing. I love the ending. I like how you wrapped up everyone's story. Well except for House. Would have liked to know how he felt after everything. But that's the only thing that bothered me. I like how Chase doesn't make it back to work. I'm glad that you did that, made it very realistic. Because in real life it's hard to go back after everything that Chase has been through. I know this was a tough one for you to write but it was fantastic. Can't wait to see more from you! |