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Butterfree
2008-06-12 . chapter 12
Aww, that's so sad =(
That is true though, I can see where you got this idea from; surely the first mamono sent back would be quite ashamed.

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree
2008-06-12 . chapter 11
That is very true =)
I love the tone of this short-chapter. It reminds me of how even though the characters aren't really physically growing up(in terms of height I mean, not strength...etc), they're still getting stronger and more experienced as time passes by.

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree
2008-06-12 . chapter 8
Ooh, I love how in character Reira seemed here ^^
You did use the line 'Wake up' a little too much, but I think that actually makes it more believable since a real person can't come up with too many meaningful things to say in just one sitting.

In other words, you did well in making Reira seem very real ^^
~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree
2008-06-12 . chapter 1
Aww, that was so sweet yet sad ^^
I love how that last line really summed it up, you're very good at summarizing a certain person's feelings once you get to know them.

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Azelf and Jirachi
2007-06-18 . chapter 12
What's Western genre, anyway? As in the wild west?
Well, at any rate, someone can't be THAT weak, right? Otherwise he wouldn't be a candidate. Right? RIGHT?!?!?! ...ok, I'll shut up.
TightropeDancing
2007-06-17 . chapter 12
Aww...

We should give that poor burnt-book kid an ice-cream cone.
stringer13
2007-05-12 . chapter 11
Right now there are 8 mamodo left.
TightropeDancing
2007-05-11 . chapter 11
Very good. -too stupid to submit an intelligent reveiw-
Eleos Argentum
2007-03-30 . chapter 10
Well, I think that "Milordo" never could control the girl if she doesn´t like.
Koko is mean!
Eleos Argentum
2007-03-30 . chapter 9
Ok. I didn't understand it completely, but the part I understood is good.
What about a complete fic with this idea?
Eleos Argentum
2007-03-30 . chapter 8
Cool!
That sounds so desperate.
Great!
Eleos Argentum
2007-03-30 . chapter 7
So sweet.
Question: Did Riddles say things (white lies) to his grandson?
You know, he use to do that to the puppet mamodo.
Animator S
2007-03-29 . chapter 10
Wow, it was great! But I wish I could know what Sherry would say to this...
Azelf and Jirachi
2007-03-26 . chapter 10
Now, this was really random.
But, I liked it anyway.
That's why I'm reviewing.
:|
EtherealSinger
2007-03-26 . chapter 10
YaayposessedKoko. >3

Mean...


But well written! x3
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