Poor Rikku. D:<

Make crushes, haha. Makes me think of oranges. XD And... uhh... crushing... and orange juice... +__+

You write Rikku/Gippal so well!! (Even when it's one-sided. :p)

:) Perfect title.

SMILE! :)

aww, that was cute!

I like how you write about Rikku. It reminds me of a person who hasn't lost their imagination and innocence (Welps, more innocent than most people xD. Or maybe she just acts like it) that usually comes along with growing up.

ehehe. I love your Rikku's version of a fairy tale which involves her knight slashing through sand worms, and her riding on a magical chocobo instead of the usual princess-in-castle-with-pony.

Well, friend... first of all, I think you need to say screw you homework for a few hours and pick up a good novel and cuddle in a blanket and relax. Second, I think this is good. However, I am about to make one of the only criticisms I think I have made on your work thus far. In most of your stories, Gippal is always the stereotypical character. The promiscuous one. I don't know why he is portrayed that way by so many people, since the game itself doesn't point out any evidence toward his being a lady's man... however. Oftentimes, you find an original way to portray him as that same stereotypical, stock fanfiction character. Maybe you should try something where he isn't always sleeping with other women? Maybe you should broaden him as a character first. You don't always need the story to broaden him, especially if it broadens him in the same way. Experiment a little. I know you're capable of it, my fellow Faction writer. So next time you drabble like this, think about the time you wrote the all dialouge one-shot and do something like that with Gippal's character.

That was great! :D

You could actually continue this...I mean, you have a great set-up of "what-ifs"? And those work great. So think about it because this is a great one-shot and I think this would be a great overall fiction.

Even if it was short, it was still amazing like always! Excellent work, and keep it up! Take care and God bless!

I love all your one-shots/drabbles, so everything's all good with me. And I can relate to only getting 5/6 hours of sleep a night. Which isn't good for me, as I need 10 to feel fully reenergized. =P Anyway, super cute ficlet.

Aw... I thought this very deep. Great job. I hope you find somewhere in that busybusy school life to write more~

That was awesome, so devilish of Rikku to send that note to Gippal's date, I love it! I like how she's just laying there all calm and relaxed about it too lol.

I miss your stories! I was so happy you found time to write another oneshot. I understand about the no time with school thing, thats how I've been, and I'm sorry if I haven't reviewed yours and Jezzi' other fic, I've been super stressed lately. I look forward to any other work from you... hopefully a continuation of the other stories you've started *wink wink*

There is life! :) Nice to see you again. Great stuff again. I truly love the way that your work has this sort of abstract quality. It's a really distinguishing and amazing quality. :)

That was super awesome :D I really liked the -crush. Make-crush part, it was really cute. I love reading your stories, they're always so great!

cool, i love it!!