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Spry 1/13/12 . chapter 1
It's okay, Princess. I need ice cream too. :P

Spry!
Sola 10/16/09 . chapter 1
Princess needs a hug!

No?

Phooey.

XD I can so picture that happening.
applepielover 6/27/09 . chapter 1
Very good. I could see the Princess's perspective in this.
Artificial Life Creator 9/20/07 . chapter 1
Very good job!
Silent Figurine 6/19/07 . chapter 1
Ah! I love this story! The last line sort of made me laugh. And you pretty much nailed the character of the Princess. Good story!
Masako Moonshade 3/11/07 . chapter 1
You've characterized the Dark Princess very well. Good job with this.
Phyllis Joy Wolfe 1/19/07 . chapter 1
I like it. Interesting how a person can think they have everything they need, then all of a sudden they realize just what they're missing... happiness. Keep it up!
FlyingFish15 12/10/06 . chapter 1
Perfect portayal of the Princess's envy-you want something so bad that you curse it. And the sphinx was cute! I loved this and would love to see more!

FlyingFishh15
corcrafields 11/29/06 . chapter 1
Another great piece. I could see it unfolding perfectly...and the last line was a thing of beauty. Yay for Sphixes!
captaincatch 11/11/06 . chapter 1
M, pretty nice piece, a bit short, but I couldn't picture it any longer.
Till My Head Falls Off 11/10/06 . chapter 1
Wow. That was really good. a lil short, but well written to make up for it. valentine would Tap-dance, wouldn't he? or riverdance. hehehe. i love his accent.
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