 Spry 1/13/12 . chapter 1It's okay, Princess. I need ice cream too. :P
Spry! |
 Sola 10/16/09 . chapter 1 Princess needs a hug!
No?
Phooey.
XD I can so picture that happening. |
 applepielover 6/27/09 . chapter 1Very good. I could see the Princess's perspective in this. |
 Artificial Life Creator 9/20/07 . chapter 1Very good job! |
 Silent Figurine 6/19/07 . chapter 1Ah! I love this story! The last line sort of made me laugh. And you pretty much nailed the character of the Princess. Good story! |
 Masako Moonshade 3/11/07 . chapter 1You've characterized the Dark Princess very well. Good job with this. |
 Phyllis Joy Wolfe 1/19/07 . chapter 1I like it. Interesting how a person can think they have everything they need, then all of a sudden they realize just what they're missing... happiness. Keep it up! |
 FlyingFish15 12/10/06 . chapter 1Perfect portayal of the Princess's envy-you want something so bad that you curse it. And the sphinx was cute! I loved this and would love to see more!
FlyingFishh15 |
 corcrafields 11/29/06 . chapter 1Another great piece. I could see it unfolding perfectly...and the last line was a thing of beauty. Yay for Sphixes! |
 captaincatch 11/11/06 . chapter 1M, pretty nice piece, a bit short, but I couldn't picture it any longer. |
 Till My Head Falls Off 11/10/06 . chapter 1 Wow. That was really good. a lil short, but well written to make up for it. valentine would Tap-dance, wouldn't he? or riverdance. hehehe. i love his accent. |