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Um...what? I'm so confused...

OMG!
NYE IS SO TOTALY JACK REINCARNATED! HA!...
okay.. probably not... but still... lol
lol Funny! "I know."
hehe that was great!
Update soon** please!

-Albino Coconut23
PS: yeah that was supposed to be soon, not son. lol it must have deleted the million extra Os that I added :P

Yeah, that does sound like something Jack would say...(sob) Heh: "I know.", "...You're dumb." Hee...
You know, I'm sorry but I really don't like Nye, he seems rather, I don't know, bleregh. (shrug) ;D

this is good! random and sad... strange combination... but STILL good! hehe!

Jack IS going to make an actual appearance in this story... isnt he? just a thought... but I like Jack better than Nye! heh! Oh well! UPDATE SON pleaSE!

-Albino Coconut23 =)

Hmm...Kraken or Kracken? I think, since we're not "Original Scandinavian" (I did not spell that right, for sure), we should spell it Kraken...and it just looks better that way. I think I would choose PB&J, cause that sound yummy right now. I thinks Aravis really has problems, she keeps having those flash backs...those are really weird. Oh, and by the way, my Jacksie-poo better come back! I don't care if you're not crushing on him anymore, bring him back Bitten! (pant) Yeah. (wave) Latah. ;D

"Yeah. She digs him."
Hehehehe! That made me laugh, that and the bit where Gibbs had a spazz attack... haha! I like Gibbs better in your story than in the movie I think. I cant resist a good Spazz! teehee!
Well this chapter was great as always! I'll be watching for the next part!

-Albino Coconut23
PS: Thanks for the reply! Just when you mentioned the kracken fishing I thought it might be related to DMC!
PPS: Congrats on your brother geting back! YAY! =)

HA HA! KAI ROCKS THE HOUSE!! Yeah. So, Jack's gone and she's goin' for some dude-who-might-be-a-loser? What the heck?

o... So... This is supposed to be kind of like... the 2nd movie, or after it i guess?
Keep going!
I look forward to reading the next part!

-Albino Coconut23

Wow, she's having a lot of flashbacks. somebody needs therapy...Ah! What? How cold you do this?? Jack's DEAD?

Well, I'm going to be completely honest with you, Bitten: Some of that was pretty cliche. (wince) There, I said it. Sorry, but it is. ;D

Really good so far!! plz ud soon