The way you have to scroll down is annoying yet strangely effective. It gives more impact to the ending at least. Been a while, Ronnie-Chan. How've you been?

oh wow! this is great!!
i love satoshixdaisuke!!
i like the wavey down the side bit!

you know what u should do?
you should write a story that goes with this poem
i loved it!1

*smiles*

Utterly poetic, beuatiful, tragic, flowing, entrancing.
That and more is what this poem is.

I don't necessarily love it since its hinting at unrequited love and is mildly depressing but the overall effect of the poem is really strong. It conveys the emotion fluidly and precisely. It's very well written.

I really like it though its kinda sad. I like ur style. I don't usually read fanfic poetry but I'm glad I read yours.
^_^

hahahahahahaha! i sound like a critic but seriously i really like it.

WOW Vyro! That was amazing! I love it SO much!

AWW! it's so good! i love it! i'm inspired to write some poetry now.

YOU ARE SO AWESOME!
Sam: you are so conceited. Who leaves themself a flatering review.

I DO!

Very, very nice. I've always loved poetry, and since you're saying this poem is from Satoshi to Daisuke, well, that's just peachy. Anyways, great job! I've been inspired today, so I insist you check out the anime 'Gravitation' if you haven't already. It's really cute and not as cheesy as I would of thought. So, whatever, keep up with the poetry! *i should do that sometime*