YES! A new chapter! so soon! okay!! no jen this time! whoot! now to get reading! What's a Xiaolin..? you mean a Violin?" ... I'm confused... Why didn't you need to know her clothes are hot now?! That's a huge compliment coming from me! When i said hot i meant they sounded awsome! very awsome! neon lights... well technically all of trverse town cept for maybe 1st district would be silent... just theres music in the game so... poor goofy... haha "making up for you" Xiao rules! but i still can't pronouuce her name... RUN SORA RUN! NO DON'T GAPED RUN! THE KEY! ... aw poor Xiao doesn't get new anything... a VERY rude word! XD
OMG! It's like KH:COM! in the manga! volume one! Sora donald and goofy are fighting... um... sombody and they slip and falland then theres this flash and a saying pops up from some random thing and then they're surfing on goofys sheild! but they miss and sail into a wall. "Okay now you gotta come with us in our tiny hubba-hyuck hyuck- hubba bubba sponcered ship with only two seats and no leg room alright?" theres something oddly farmilar about the "What's wrong with our clothing" but i can't put my finger on it... It was awsome! I loved it! write more soon! Love ya! (friendly way)

YAY! XT IS BACK! oh ya!! -doing happy dance-

Jen: whoohoo go kill yourself while you're at it...

Stop bringing me down! -glares- I have been waiting a long time for this moment... -tries to look all wise like-

Jen: you look like a dumbash...

o.o NO SWEARING!

Jen: you swear now get on with your flipping reveiw

fine... who's D/G's?

Jen: Donald and Goofy stupid

Oh right! I knew that!

Jen: no you didn't...

Shut it!Yes curse the spelling mishaps!CURSE THEM!

Jen: Curse yourself you're the who misses

Hey! ah whatever SHUN! -turns away from Jen- Cid is great! Yellow Haired freaks rule the world! XD Yeah Jen don't dis Goofy!!

Jen: I thought you were shunning me...

oh... was i... um... WELL DON'T DIS GOOFY!!

Jen: goofy sucks...

BAD! -hits Jen-

Jen: WHY YOU LITTLE -clobbers poor unfortunate S-O-O-

ow... x.x

Jen: you deserved that...

how?!

Jen: Well for not updating and finally getting to the part where i come back in even for a sparingly short two minutes and for hitting me.

THAT BARLEY DESERVES BEING BEATEN TO A PULP OVER!

Jen: Sure it does.

gr moving on... -glaring at Jen- The chase scene's awsome! It reminds me of scooby-doo and the "Bless me little Hobbit Feet" nyhahaha that was great if you like lord of the rings i suggest watching "The One Ring To Rule Them All" There's three of them (acctually four...) on Newgrounds!

Jen: who watchs that stuff

You know what...

Jen: You dragged ME here not the other way around

oh be quite!

Jen: -_-

Yeah Jen is obsessed with Leon and Sephy...acctually she's obsessed with... um... what's his face... well it sorta went in a patern you know how she's somewhat of a *cough*s*cough*l*cough*ucoughtcough (throats sora yeah that's it) so when she first lay eyes on Leon she decided he must be hers then later she saw sephy and ditched Leon for Sephy who didn't want her poor Jenny...

Jen: shut up brat.

make me!

Jen: fine

NO NO ITS OKAY STAY WHERE YOU ARE! o.o

Jen: no problem on my behalf... Now read the story! you're taking all day!

Sorry ma'am o.o erm... anyways... I love sora and poor poor poor (EVIL!!) Miko... -shakes head-

Jen: Stop being stupid...

"Unknown to Sora or Miko at that time" I don't think it will ever be known to them but i laughed at it because the stupidity of it's so true!

Jen: oh hahaha so funny... not.

IT IS TOO! You're evil and mean and cruel go shoot yourself!

Jen: ...

yeah go be emo!

Jen: -_-

hmph. -reads on- haha I love how Goofy says An-sam in the game! it's so great! -reads on-I love Xiao! hey how do you pronouce that? i've been wondering for the longest time... like Ziao? or "EX-I-AO" i don't know but im trying... -reads on- wow how donald said "We need to find this "key"" reminded me of the KH Chronicles (1.2.) haha Donald sounds so drugged up there..

Jen: read the fic and stop refering to other things!

-glares and reads on- ... -eyes sparkle- dagers... gimme...

Jen: -smacks sora- BAD!

ow!! sorry sorry! -reads on- wow... i don't want to sound like a lez here but that outfit sounds hot...

Jen: -_- now why don't you just say "it sounds awsome" instead of 'hot' then people wouldn't assume you're gay.

Don't have the brain capacity... anyways... "“Is he mad?!” Miko cried, watching Leon run off “He just jumped down from a two story building?!”" the best line so far! I laughed!

Jen: she was stating the truth.. and truth isn't funny...

yes it is!

Jen: and you're an idiot!

HEY! -reads on grumbling about Jen- haha Donald... -reads- nyhahahaha "again" -reads- you typed hope you liked this chapter twice hehe, Update soon Xiao! it was awsome!

Jen: not that great...

It was so friggin awsome! update soon! o.o

-Sora

Jen: and me..

Sweet! You pre-srote the first six chapters! OH YEAH! lots of great reading! booyah!

Jen: Im cool.

No you're a loser!

Jen: XT said im cool so screw you.

... -sniffles-

Jen: -_- ;

Anyways! Sorry bout continuesly pointing out spelling errors (it's just sometimes it takes me longer than it should to figure out what something says)

Jen: The fact that you're mentally challanged could help with that...

I AM NOT MENTALLY CHANALLENGED! AT LEAST IM NOT A DRUGGY!

Jen: I'm not a druggy...

oh... right... WELL IM NOT COLD! AND EVIL!

Jen: To bad.

Your not making this easy...

Jen: Was it supposed to be easy?

yes...

Jen: Oh, to bad.

-sighs- anyways... PLUTO!

Jen: what about it?

HIM!!

Jen: you've decided that a planet is a guy...?

NO! the dog!

Jen: OH! That dog Maleficent Ate...

WHAT?! O.o

Jen: nothing... you'd be surprised at how messed up that 'bad guys' are...

o.o okay... moving on...Hey c'mon!! the buy's Tidus! you know the kid from the island who had a red metal rod and liked to wish he could beat Riku but thought he was supirior to Sora?!

Jen: that kids a freak.

Be nice Jenny.

Jen: you just called him that and never call me that again, remember what happened at hte end of the last reveiw?

-shudders- okay ill never call you JENNY, ever again.

Jen: okay.

heh heh... okay! reading on! Cid! XD Cids great!

Jen: he looks like a feag...

BE NICE!

Jen: -rolls eyes- whatever.

o.o NO SWEARING!

Jen: you swear...

...right...

Jen: -nods- mmhmm

-ahem- anyways…. You keep on saying usual instead of unusual… and the other resembled a… turtle! XD Why is it that every world you go to that they change goofy into a turtle?! He’s a dog! Sheesh! I love Goofy man! He’s so nice!

Jen: he’s stupid and pathetic.

That’s not nice!

Jen: Just stating the truth…

That was mean! Say yer sorry!

Jen: no

Okay whatever… haha I nearly forgot about lewy Duey and Hewy… or however you spell there names… when Donald first said that I was like ‘he has nephews…?’ THEN I remembered!! XD

Jen: yep your mentally challenged…

NO IM VERTICALLY CHALLANGED!

Jen: … okay…

Haha I never got the point of that sign either! LMAO! XD Then walk in, They run screaming out, then run screaming in they walk out. ITS SO GREAT! XD haha nice goofy! XD “well we’ll stop to eat” hehehehehehe O.o OMG! SORA! YOU FELL! ARE YOU OKAY?!?!?

Jen: hes in the flipping fan fiction! YOU CANT TALK TO HIM!

Oh…. WELL HE BETTER BE OKAY! Haha that’s a bit of an understatement! XD ITS LEON

Jen: -drools- so hot…

o.o oh mi gawd jenny are you okay…?

Jen: -not paying attention- my love…

o.o –cough- okay… haha XD with what your stick?! My (or Kori’s) usual answer would be “Why yes!” “You have a problem with the stick?!” “You calling me weak?!?!” “I can fight with any weapon! Stick or sword!” or “I could ESIALLY beat YOU with my stitch of awesome power hands down!!”

Jen: -still drooling at leon- mine,….

… -ahem- reading on… hehe Don! XD Aerith! GO SORA! –cheerign and waving and clapping and making whistle sounds (wheet-whoo)- o that’s gotta hurt… didn’t know a foot could twist that far… Sweet go sora! Throw that key! That’s right Strike Raid away!

Jen: Leon’s even hotter when he’s fighting as hard as he can and the sweat makes his skin shine… -sighs-

Im REALLY scared now… OMG! MIKO! DAMN YOU LEON IM THE ONE WHOS SUPPOSED TO KILL HER!

Jen: -drools- Leon… your fire ball spell is so secy…

… MIKO! NO ill get you leon! CLIFFY!

Jen: NO! IM GOING TO KILL YOU XT! NOW I CAN’T LOOK (read) ABOUT MY PRECIOUS LEON!

You like sephy more…

Jen: Sephiroth?! Where?!

-_-

Jen: oh… ahahaha

Yeah I loved the wild goose chase too! Yeah you nailed goofy and Donald’s personalities! It sounded JUST like them! Yeah I know it’s in the game but it’s a bit different in the game! XD its not all around the hotel! Its all over!

-Sora (& Jenny)
Jen: gr it's Jennifer!! IM GONNA KILL YOU NOW PUNK!

o.o bye!

YES ANOTHER CHAPTER! THE NEXT DAY! YOUR ON A ROLE HERE!

Jen: and i came along to make sure she doesn't hurt anything...

DIE HEARTLESS! -lunges at a shadow-

Jen: -restrans s-o-o- anyways... you came here to read so read...

YES I SHALL! -starts reading- Your writing is awsome! how'd it make you laugh? i just brought Jennifer along...

Jen: It's Jen...

Yes Jenny...

Jen: Don't make me hurt you.

o.o yas'am... How could you not have any idea?! I was SURE (SURE I TELL YOU) that i had mentioned it TO MANY time sbefore

Jen: you never mentioned it on Fanfiction... well maybe once or twice... but it doesn't mean XT was paying attention, who would?

ME!

Jen: -_-;

You should be proud cause your stories awsome! KYA SORA! -glomps sora-

Jen: he deserved that...

Sora: x.x thanks...?

YAY!

Jen: CALM DOWN!

OW DID YOU HAVE TO HIT?!

Jen: yes

-sniffles- ... -glare of death- stupid kairi... hehe i wanna see what sora's mom looks like -imagining some crazy lady whos unhealthily skinny crazy spiked out hair in a yellow dress-

Jen: that's scary...

teehee... -glare of death- stupid Miko sweet talking sora... HE DESERVES BETTER!!

Jen: ITS A FAN FICTION! SHES ALOUD TO DO WHAT SHE BLOODY WELL WANTS TO DO SO STFU AND READ!

o.o jenny swore!

Jen: so? wipe that look off your face and read!

o-okay! okay already im seeing spelling and grammer issues so just to be fair im gonna guess you do not have spell check and you were typeing fast, like you said "couldn't help up gape" keyword: up which would make more sense as but as in "couldn't help but gape"

Jen: sheesh you coulda just said "you have some spelling and grammer errors again"

Well i feel like being evil

Jen: and that's not fair to XT what if she did that to you?!

... your right!

Jen: I always am...

I think automatically is one word or a dashy word...

Jen: dashy word?

yeah like thank-you or auto-matically it doesn't look right with a space...

Jen: -_- just read!

haha that's something i share!

Jen: what?

Once i has a goal i can never be astrayed from it unless its one of those goals you make up to keep teachers happy XD

Jen: ... who would do that?

what?

Jen: lie to teachers, being bluntly honest is so much funner.

... right... your never honest...

Jen: to friends and family, but to teachers bluntly honest.

... okay... LMAO! That was great!

Jen: ... what?

"Xiao looked at it for a few seconds then she said “It sucks”" it was so great!

Jen: no... no it's not... and i completly agree with her... my weapon is so much cooler it looks like--

NO DONT SPOIL MY STORY! -clamps hand over jen's mouth-

Jen: -rolls eyes-

hehe i like how you go "Suddenly!" and then say stuff! its so great. haha if you've ever read the manga sora destroys it by a blow to the head, i dont get how he jumped that high though...

aw she didn't do a "Suddenly!" there it was just... "suddenly" -sniffs-

Jen: you are retarded...

yesh... wait! NO HE LET GO! -sniffles- Write the next chapter soon! i love the wakeing up scene! XD WRTIE WRITE WRITE!

-Sora

Jen: And Jen...

right!

-Sora and Jenny

Jen: WHY YOU LITTLE--

This may get a bit graphic... O.o
-presses 'submit reveiw' button-

All of you BACK OFF! SORA's MINE! YOU HEAR ME! MINE!

haha your last chapter WAS awsome! I has high expectectations for this one! and you did do some awsome description bck there! i was so surprised! you not only can make really funny fics but really good normalish ones too! haha glory hound!! i like that!Don't worry! spelling mistakes get us all! literally us ALL. especally me... Im not that good at descriptions! i acctually really suck and go on to long... my personal oppinion... anyways...

Jen: you shouldn't have asked that.

I am intent on killing Miko because SHES STEALING SORA DAMMIT! well i suppose i havtta let her live for the sake of this awsome fic but be warned once it's over... SHES over...

Jen: yeah yeah just start reading.

-ahem- and if you don't remember who this 'charming' lady is look back to chapters 1-4 i think on my KH fic, she Jasmines older sister... who wont be back in the fic for a while...

Jen: AGH!! SHUT UP! Just read the fic! most likly the only reason it was posted was for you! stop talking about yourself!

okay okay! im jsut in that kind of mood!

Jen: which is why I'm here...

right... grr the first thing he askes is 'wheres miko'

Jen: -sarcasum- yes and he'd be asking for you if you were in the fic...

Your right!! thanks Jenny!

Jen: ... insufferable dumb a--...

hm?

Jen: my point exactly.

uh... i still don't get it...

Jen: -sighs- never midn write a normal reveiw...

SS. no Sora! XD! XIAO BETTER WIN!

Jen: That's a stupid name I'd call it "Blood-thirsty Revenge"

... okay... XIAO WINS! YEAH! WHEET WHOO!

jen: wheet-whoo?

it's teh same sound you get when you whistle!! for those who can't whistle!

Jen: you can whistle... you know what riku should've wona dn named it "Blood-Thirsty Revenge" or... "BTR" short for "Blood-Thirsty Revenge"

... -cough- reading on... gr screw killing Miko Im gonna shoot Kairi... I always found that stupid "A (as in ONE) bottle of drinking water" are they stupid?! they're gonna need alot more than that to survive and why dont they just raid they're parents fridges and cupboreds for REAL FOOD?!

Jen: calm down...

I'm calm... haha i remmber the first time i played the game i couldn't find the last stupid mushroom! It's great how you added that! XD WAHAHAHAHA SHE CALLED KAIRI A HE!
"Kairi looked up at the sky then back at her friends “Wanna call it a day?” he asked"

Jen: it was probably a typo...

oh.. yeah.. heh... my bad... Wow! That was awsome! great chapter XT! Im not kidding it was great no matter waht Jen says!

Jen: ... it sucked... and you suck at writing just quit now...

DONT SAY THAT! IF SHE STOPS ILL DIE BECAUSE ITS SO GOOD AND UNFINISHED GOOD STORIES ARE A WASTE! o.o YOU DIDN'T HERE JEN!

Jen: she read stupid...

OH CRAP THEN DONT READ IT! o.o NO READY! IT WAS GREAT GOOD JEN DIDNT INSULT YOU BECAUSE YOUR WORK IS SO GODLY THAT IF SHE INSULTED IT SHE WOULD HAVE TO BE SCREFICED TO THE FOUR WAR GODS!

Jen: -sighs- ...

-starts scrficing jen-

Jen: -_-

bye XT!

-Sora

P.S. UPDATE SOON! ILL WITHER AND DIE WITHOUT IT!

That was great XT! There were a few spelling errors, but i didn't notice anything other than that! (yeah im one to be talking huh?) Anyways it was awsome! you write really good 'serious' stuff! And who's a certain someone who's really good?! I'd like to read there fics!

-Sora

P.S. IM GONNA KILL MIKO! (a.k.a meeko)