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Anime Hero
2009-10-07 . chapter 8
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!GREAT FIC
yummyswirlz
2009-08-10 . chapter 8
im actully thair was a lemon in this ch before he left dont try anything on him hanabi
yummyswirlz
2009-08-10 . chapter 7
no only 1 more ch to read
yummyswirlz
2009-08-10 . chapter 6
wat the hell is that supposed 2 mean hanabi DAMN HER
yummyswirlz
2009-08-10 . chapter 5
this lemon was actully too good to be your first
yummyswirlz
2009-08-10 . chapter 4
choose hinata already didnt u say u love er damn u HANABI
yummyswirlz
2009-08-10 . chapter 3
damn u HANABI
yummyswirlz
2009-08-10 . chapter 2
let the games begin
yummyswirlz
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
i love this ch cant wait 2 read next
akaieXdevil
2008-11-21 . chapter 8
Wuzzup! We are still waiting for that chapter it's been MONTHS! c'mon your killing us!!

G0o0od LUCK!!
hmfan24
2008-10-06 . chapter 8
Gosh, I don't think I've ever read a lemon that detailed. Oh...yeah...the plot - that's getting more interesting by the second. I'm eager to see what Sasuke and his other wife, Hanabi, plan to do on their week away. Although I will say, it's not nice to leave devoted readers such as I with a big cliffhanger. (Especially when you have a job T.T) lol. Keep on truckin' at work!
realityfling18
2008-08-07 . chapter 1
heyy! love it! though i'm not sure i'm big on competition between two sisters, but is till am intrigued by this story. its definately one that i really love!!XD
BlueMoon-Hime
2008-08-06 . chapter 8
I'm just gonna suggest this but sasuke should 'accidently' be hit by a jutsu that makes 2 of him so that hinata and hanabi can both be happy and they can rebuild the clan quicker! its just a suggestion and you don't have to use it. i just think its a great way to end this story when you have to.^-^
kat
2008-08-06 . chapter 8
Hey! Just want to thank you for an update. So far I kind of feel bad for Hanabi. She seems to be left out all the time. I hope Sasuke will remember that she exists in your future chapters. =]
Shinryu-Twilight Dragon
2008-08-05 . chapter 8
aw poor hinata chan, oh well, when is hanabi getting her night of fun anyways? bring out the next one pls
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