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Bronka
2007-10-21 . chapter 2
Wow that's all i'm saying
StudentofDust
2007-09-26 . chapter 2
hm... interesting continuance. I'm interested in seeing if Yugi and Lara ever get along. XD
StudentofDust
2007-09-26 . chapter 1
whoa. it's a good intro. I'll definitely keep reading. ^^
Tomboy 601
2007-07-02 . chapter 7
Yugi's dad died a painful dealth, MWAHAHAHAHA! Sorry. When's the sequel gonna be up? Or is it already up? More, please! ^_^
Tomboy 601
2007-06-18 . chapter 6
Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter. I wasn't aware that it was posted. I was at my dad's house for the weekend. Yugi's dad is a total jerk! I hope he dies a painful death. You brought Ryou in the last chaper!! As for the pairing, I think you should go with Seto/Lara.
bury me among the ashes
2007-05-24 . chapter 5
And the plot thickens... alright, the developement was pretty good here, keep going.
Journey Maker
2007-02-09 . chapter 4
I really love this story. I really do hope that Lara and Seto do meet each other later in their lives. I am so proud of Seto for going back and facing what ever he has to face for not only his sake but also for his brother, and Lara for going back to the Motou's because for someone so young she needs someone to love and care for her and Grandpa is just the one to do that. Please update when you can..
Tomboy 601
2007-02-08 . chapter 4
Lara's finally going back home! Gozaburo is really mean to Seto. Good thing he died in a filler episode. At least I think it was a filler. Great job and update soon!
bury me among the ashes
2007-02-08 . chapter 4
Nice chapter, I liked that is was longer and more detailed than the first one, you did very well with this chapter, the strange part to me is the fact that you said in the bottom of the fic that Lara isn't human. You'll need to be very indepth about that cause it's seems kinda farfetched, but awesome at the same time. Keep writing and I'll keep reading and of course reviewing faithfully, wonderful job on this update, do it again real soon.

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16forever
2007-01-10 . chapter 3
What! Wow! What an unpridictable twist! Great job! Your really good at keeping your readers intersted...☺
bury me among the ashes
2007-01-08 . chapter 3
You forget capitalazation a lot! Other than that it's pretty cool!
Journey Maker
2006-12-31 . chapter 3
Where is Lara and her mother Sandra from? The creatures you described sound like something from an alternate Universe or something. Will Lara go back to Solomon's house? Is there going to be a possible pairing of Seto adn Lara. I loved this story. Update when you can..To answer your question, I think that a story about Yami Yugi and Mai would be different but it sounds good. I don't think I've ever read a story with Yami Yugi and Mai as lovers...
bury me among the ashes
2006-12-10 . chapter 2
Cool chapter
16forever
2006-12-09 . chapter 2
tortured and unconscious are increadbly big words for a five old. But you did do a fantastic job!
Tomboy 601
2006-12-09 . chapter 2
Cliffy. hurt Yugi. he deserves it. This chapter was good.
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