I've just found your story and am really enjoying it. Captain Haddock reminds of a series of book from when I was a kid, Tin Tin. Is he one and the same? Great job!

No. I get caught up with the story and what do I find waiting for me a CLIFFHANGER why...why would you do that to me. LOL naw I love the story so far and can't wait till you get a chance to update again. I know not to try and rush a update because then their not as good as when you take your time. So keep up the great work and look forward to more.

Didn't Hermione just shake Ron's hand and hug Harry. If I'm wrong sorry I pointed it out but. I like the story so far a good overview of what happened at the end of the book with just a few twists in it.

wat going to happen next

hey u've got a great story here!
r u going to continue it?

This story rocks. I have just finifhed re-reading it and it was as good this time as it was the last. I hope you do plan to finish this story because it would be sad to see it abbandoned. Keep up the great writing and hope to see an update sometime in the future.

I wouldnt know if youve read it or not, but if you read the first chapter of More Important Than Any Broomstick, you will find that the chapters are almost identical

The word "Cute" did me in.
He's twelve and a bit dense when it comes to girls.
He wouldn't say she looked cute.

He'd say something like she looked different from before, her smile was brighter, her eyes were bright, for a moment he only saw her (granted, just as corny but a twelve year old boy doesn't use the word 'cute', its just not manly.)

great story

Good

Excellent story. I hope to see more out soon. Later.

wow this went downhill fast, you cant keep your story straight, your timeline is to rush and jumbled, you try to summerize what was in the book and add a half a paragraph of H/HR fluff and are trying to claim its a story. molly already already had 5 kids before lily graduated from hogwarts how the hell would they be best friends, your story is AU but the weasels werent in the order the first time so how would they have met?

not much for business are you? in any financial institution workers will talk to customers about other patrons its just not done

700 galleons i believe

SMURFS! (Why I don't know, I'm insane like that.) What I do know is that smurfs is a cool word and this is a cool story. And I need therapy. Therapy is expensive but bubblewrap is cheap! Oh. CLIFFIE. (looka I ended with capitals and started with capitals... or not.)