I remember that book-well, all the books in general. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

What it's over that's just HORRIBLE!

This could be interesting

HOW CUTE! It was so adorable. I really liked it.

This concept has so much potential, but what you have posted is hardly worth reading. If you're going to do a one shot, you need to have character development, background, the circumstances leading up to the event etc. I'd start again if I were you, set the scene, create some tension between Sam and Stacey and then let it unfold. What you have posted is not a story.
Your writing style isn't bad though, you just really need to expand on the ideas. I would love to see you explore this theme more. Please don't consider this a flame, the object of this review was to give you some constructive feedback that you could use.