The two of you did a marvelous job with this!

Beautiful, haunting and sad! Perfect for Davy Jones.

Loved it!
Cheers!
Nytd

I have yet to find better lyrics to this song. These lyrics are completely awesome. I was so happy when I finally was able to read a good lyric to "Davy Jones". Much Kudos, and I will be looking forward to reading more of your work!

I like it!

*Dies from AWE-ing at the song* That's so sad!

ugh, i feel daft now.
yours is soo much better than mine.
me compliments, friend.
you're an exceptional writer.

--Captain J.T.

Yay! Lyrics! And with more than one verse, too! Cool! Man, I wish we owned that music. Dangit. Oh well.

Congratulations; your (and your sister's, just in case she is reading over your shoulder and gets offended) lyrics are better than mine... Yay!