Very nice indeed. A pleasant read overall and poor Erik just must have been seething at night trying to figure out what was going on. Well done.

ah i dont want it to end its such a gd story its a same nvm gd on u R

T final chapter i enjoyed reading this cant w8 to see wot happens in t climax of t story i will read on

Gd job R

i like so far and it looks like they r tying to get eric into a trap i will read on and see

it is looking gd so far and i like t little maze and now crisom might die hopefully not because i want to know wot happens to eric

nice getting intresting i wonder if carrie will find out soon

i like so far and wraith did decerve it for getting very greedy lets see wot happen nxt

ah dont kill eric b will find out when i read on

I like its a pity that we dont know what crimson looks like, but we will propbly find out sooner or later

This is gd and i feel soz for Meg b she was getting very anoyying, so she kind of gets what is coming to her i will read on and see what happens

ah y did u hav to kill t old man its so sad

meany

i like t messager a lot really funny and i am thinking i know him from somewhere hm

cant w8 to read t nxt chapter very gd so far

i like t new recruit in this chapter and it is getting intresting lets see how she does in the nxt chapter

gd job R

i like and he was a bit stupid for underestermating the job in the end he decervid wot he got

gd chapter

and soz for t spelling mistakes