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toothchick
2007-10-03
ch 1,
abuseI loved this story! I came across your story because you were listed in another author's favorites. I will look for your other stories!

I hope this continues! Grissom & Sara belong together!
gsrshipper9
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abusei love this story! its so good. the last part was kinda wierd, like they swiched roles, but it was good,
cabooklover21
2006-11-10
ch 1,
abuseWow, that's an intersting way to spin a story line. I really enjoyed it.
wobbear
2006-11-03
ch 1,
abuseI'm days late in reviewing. Words are not my friend right now . . . so please refer to what Domo wrote, just below. I used to think that angst was too angsty for me to enjoy (huh? - see, that's why I wanted to jump on onto Domo's coat tails), but this was uber wonderful.
"That sound you hear is not me whistling in the dark." Oh yes, it is.
Domo Arigato
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abuseAnd dreamsofhim said: “Let there be angst”. And then there was angst. And they all read and thought that it was wonderful so they all hurried to read again, review and recommend. And there was much well deserved praise and gratitude for dreamsofhim’s beautiful writing. And they all rejoiced for they knew there would be more breathtaking stories in the future.
EstreyaStar
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuseI. Love. It.

It is amazing. I don't think there are words to express just how wonderfully brilliant this fic is. I know that I make a point not to tell people to continue after a fic is completed, but I will break my own rule for once and ask that you please, please, please, add something on. It doesn't have to be happy. It doesn't have to be long. I just really want this story to continue.

Again, it's perfect. Brilliant. Superb. Fantabulous, if that's even a word.
Elialys
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuseWOW!!
I LOVE this fic!! The angst was so good, I was completely tearful when Griss left after Sara told him she loved him :'(
So, it was awesome, really, I love the POV you chose, and this is so believable !
The end was just GREAT!! Made me laugh ^^ (it was a good thing after all this freaking good angst!)

Thanks for the great time, it made my night!!
*Elialys*
leddy
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuseYou weren't kdding about the angst, but you can't blame Sara for moving on. I did like the fact that she knew the exact number of times they made love. Nice take on the end scene.
This is one of those stories where my heart hurts for both characters. Once again a terrific read.
chiops
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuseThat was an amazing AU-story. The narrative of Sara was so real, so believable (and I know that 'wishful thinking' very well myself). Thanks a lot for this story!
Kristafied
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuseExcellent AU. I like the games' names in italics. Strong writing, very well done.
Taletha
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuseOkay, wait. This is the end? There's not going to be a follow up to this?

This was a great story. I loved the back ground info. Especially the part where Grissom flies in once a month to see Sara - that would totally fit Grissom's character.

Honestly though, Grissom's not going to go back to San Fran and raise some hell about Sara getting married? Or how about, just as the wedding approaches, he calls Sara and ask her to come in on the Holly Gribbs case? Or how about, Sid realizes that Sara will never completely be his? Or they run into one another at another seminar and Grissom realizes that he royally screwed up and this time it's him doing the Wishfull Thinking? Or Grissom confesses to Brass about Sara getting engaged and Brass encourages him to stop being a you know what and call her? Or Or Or Or...

Or...I don't know! Anything but this story is over.

Think about...hmm?
Midnight-Psychotics
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuseWow, love this! really, really, really good, and so true :P great stuff!
gsrshipper
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuseWow, this was amazing. The end was great; totally unexpected. Thanks for sharing this!
stareagle
2006-10-27
ch 1,
abusewow - you surprised me with the twist on this - I loved it- You did a great job. Thank you
StarlaMarie
2006-10-27
ch 1,
abuseYou definitely have something different here...sure it was angsty and made my insides hurt but it was also undeniably beautiful.
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