You might want to... ask for constructive critisim because I'm not going to give it. But, you need it. XD

Sappy, very Sappy...

Very well done! I'm currantly re-reading the trilogy, starting again on the third book, and I think you hit the nail on the head with this one The voice you gave Kitty was just like hers, and I appreciate that a lot! sometimes Kitty's charactor can be all over the place in fics Keep up the good work!

That was nice, really emotional)