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| SunnyHinata 2008-02-03 ch 1,  | abuseyay! :)) |
| Newbie GK 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseReverse psychology is the greatest, isn't it? Wonderful story! I loved the ending. |
| Silver Warrior 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseThat is indeed the ebst way to get Naruto to do something: tell him he can't. Overall Neji used a very good method to manipulate Naruto. Now hopefully he's no longer blind to his own romantic life. |
| FatedRagnarok 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuseNicely done and cute. ^_^ |
| Katterree Fengari 2006-10-31 ch 1, | abuseaw, cute-cute ending...I love Neji being devious, giving Naruto reverse psychology. |
| S'TarKan 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abuseNicely done! And from a POV we don't normally see much in fan fiction. You also kept a nice balance of believable manipulation in Neji's conversation with Naruto. I had no problems believing that Naruto would fall for it - or that Neji could have said those words. And Ten Ten's epilogue was a great capper. |
| Clark Cradic 2006-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat job man. You've got a real talent for romantic stories. Especially Naruto/Hinata. Keep up the good work. |
| causeiambetta 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseWell written and cute story. I could definitely see this happening. Liked how it stayed current with Asuma's death too. great job |
| NefCanuck 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseWell done, you really have Naruto's psyche down... I think and Neji played the situation perfectly. My compliments on a well crafted tale... |
| Dragon Man 180 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I love how Neji used reverse psychology to get Naruto to chase after Hinata. I just hope things continue to go well for our heros. Will Neji try to find a good girl for Gai and Lee? |
| Ivellios 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. What goes around comes around indeed. |