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Lovedward48
2009-09-12 . chapter 30
I love Raveana, Reginald and the dragons!! (Raveana is a beautiful name by the way) The dragons were well thought through and it was fun getting to know their personalities! Esdra is my favorite, I think. I'm glad that not all dragons adored Harry and not one submitted itself to him! (lol) Silverhawk liking Draco more was briliant! (grin) They all got one thing in common though. They're all incredulously stubborn!! (chuckle)
Good job! :)
Momochuu
2009-07-31 . chapter 30
love the story, great plot!
Origina1ity
2009-05-22 . chapter 30
I loved it!
Makalani Astral
2009-04-05 . chapter 30
that was really good.
Makalani Astral
2009-04-04 . chapter 20
soo good! will read more later.
DMHPsasunaru
2008-12-30 . chapter 30
This fic was really really good and it had me hooked till the end. I like the twist that Syren was a leather maker! even though you didn't choose a dominant in my mind it was Draco. I'm now going to check out your other stories and good luck in future work!
ObsidianEbony
2008-12-26 . chapter 30
Awesome plot and dragons! I think my favorite one was Basta.

I found this an extremely pleasurable read and want to look at more of your work. Great job!
Draeconin
2008-11-07 . chapter 12
I suppose it makes sense that Draco would continue his family's thieving ways.
Draeconin
2008-11-07 . chapter 7
I also meant to add that, although the fanfiction is pretty good, the original bits (the scenes from the past) are absolutely wonderful. I think you might consider writing original fantasy, yourself.
Draeconin
2008-11-07 . chapter 6
- sliding his boxers off

Using the generic 'underwear' would alright, but not 'boxers'. They're a 20th century American invention that didn't begin to gain popularity even in America until the 1950's. And you expect a pureblood aristocratic British wizard who has grown up wearing neo-Victorian fashions (when not wearing robes) and who has been taught anti-muggle ideals to wear them? Not even in your dreams.

I don't like Hermione (never have, due to her bossy, arrogant nature), and your Blaise seems to have some of her characteristics. Come to that, your Pansy seems to have some of Ron's characteristics (loyal, but lazy).

I'm also a bit disappointed in both Draco and Harry. I never would have pegged Draco for someone who would let a peer bully him - at least without good reason, and I haven't seen one. And one would think Harry would begin to wise up, at some point. He IS supposed to have strong Slytherin tendencies, after all (something JKR seems to conveniently forget after the Sorting).
TrulyTheOne
2008-10-04 . chapter 30
Aw. It is over. It was a wonderful ride though and I greatly enjoyed every minute of it! You are a wonderful writer and your style is unlike a lot of people's on here. PROPS and goodbye
TrulyTheOne
2008-10-04 . chapter 29
I am glad Voldie is dead. And that everyone else is ok too, even Lucius -gag-

Just a little hint, don't use cliches. The head and heart thing in the last chapter and 'patience is a virtue' in this chapter!

OMG It's almost over!!
TrulyTheOne
2008-10-04 . chapter 28
Harry does a lot of collapsing, it's kinda repetitive.

Otherwise go Good Guys!!
TrulyTheOne
2008-10-04 . chapter 27
Amazing Chapter. I hope this is leading to the be-all battle of Harry and Voldie
TrulyTheOne
2008-10-04 . chapter 26
I was so sure Snape was a goner! And i enjoyed the contents of the Chest and am stoked to know what is w/in that book!!
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