 Lovedward48 2009-09-12 . chapter 30 I love Raveana, Reginald and the dragons!! (Raveana is a beautiful name by the way) The dragons were well thought through and it was fun getting to know their personalities! Esdra is my favorite, I think. I'm glad that not all dragons adored Harry and not one submitted itself to him! (lol) Silverhawk liking Draco more was briliant! (grin) They all got one thing in common though. They're all incredulously stubborn!! (chuckle)
Good job! :) |
 Momochuu 2009-07-31 . chapter 30love the story, great plot! |
 Origina1ity 2009-05-22 . chapter 30I loved it! |
 Makalani Astral 2009-04-05 . chapter 30that was really good. |
 Makalani Astral 2009-04-04 . chapter 20soo good! will read more later. |
 DMHPsasunaru 2008-12-30 . chapter 30This fic was really really good and it had me hooked till the end. I like the twist that Syren was a leather maker! even though you didn't choose a dominant in my mind it was Draco. I'm now going to check out your other stories and good luck in future work! |
 ObsidianEbony 2008-12-26 . chapter 30Awesome plot and dragons! I think my favorite one was Basta.
I found this an extremely pleasurable read and want to look at more of your work. Great job! |
 Draeconin 2008-11-07 . chapter 12I suppose it makes sense that Draco would continue his family's thieving ways. |
 Draeconin 2008-11-07 . chapter 7I also meant to add that, although the fanfiction is pretty good, the original bits (the scenes from the past) are absolutely wonderful. I think you might consider writing original fantasy, yourself. |
 Draeconin 2008-11-07 . chapter 6- sliding his boxers off
Using the generic 'underwear' would alright, but not 'boxers'. They're a 20th century American invention that didn't begin to gain popularity even in America until the 1950's. And you expect a pureblood aristocratic British wizard who has grown up wearing neo-Victorian fashions (when not wearing robes) and who has been taught anti-muggle ideals to wear them? Not even in your dreams.
I don't like Hermione (never have, due to her bossy, arrogant nature), and your Blaise seems to have some of her characteristics. Come to that, your Pansy seems to have some of Ron's characteristics (loyal, but lazy).
I'm also a bit disappointed in both Draco and Harry. I never would have pegged Draco for someone who would let a peer bully him - at least without good reason, and I haven't seen one. And one would think Harry would begin to wise up, at some point. He IS supposed to have strong Slytherin tendencies, after all (something JKR seems to conveniently forget after the Sorting). |
 TrulyTheOne 2008-10-04 . chapter 30Aw. It is over. It was a wonderful ride though and I greatly enjoyed every minute of it! You are a wonderful writer and your style is unlike a lot of people's on here. PROPS and goodbye |
 TrulyTheOne 2008-10-04 . chapter 29I am glad Voldie is dead. And that everyone else is ok too, even Lucius -gag-
Just a little hint, don't use cliches. The head and heart thing in the last chapter and 'patience is a virtue' in this chapter!
OMG It's almost over!! |
 TrulyTheOne 2008-10-04 . chapter 28Harry does a lot of collapsing, it's kinda repetitive.
Otherwise go Good Guys!! |
 TrulyTheOne 2008-10-04 . chapter 27Amazing Chapter. I hope this is leading to the be-all battle of Harry and Voldie |
 TrulyTheOne 2008-10-04 . chapter 26I was so sure Snape was a goner! And i enjoyed the contents of the Chest and am stoked to know what is w/in that book!! |