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| RosexRaven 2007-11-25 ch 3,  | abusehaha...sasuke had to carry her! -:chants that repeatedly until sasuke hits me in the head:- oh he'll pay for that...i know where he sleeps...in my closet...come out come out where ever you are...don't you get it...he's in my closet...anyways, awesome story 3 thumbs up |
| Faithful_Reviewer 2007-11-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseOH NU Kyuubi can't be gone...He has to be hiding somewhere or something like that..Maybe Kyuubi needs help? There should be a class on "How not to stereyotype 101" for little children that want to kill Naruto >>. Um..I never saw the whole Sauske waiting in the tree thing..I mean how would he know? Sure came in handy though ^^ Cant wait to read the outsiders |
| Faithful_Reviewer 2007-11-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseThere are a few spelling mistakes and I can show them to you if you want. Other than that It's well constructed. In the last chapter you used the word mirth and in this one you used the word Foxily. I like the two words not normally used for characteristicts in your stories. |
| Faithful_Reviewer 2007-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseMIRTH I like that new word Gin! The grinch of halloween nice very nice except I doubt Sauske would have worn that costume he probably would have just thrown on a sheet and cut holes in teh eyes ^^; I'm lovin it! |
| Dragonluvr1993 2007-10-24 ch 2, | abuseThat was awesome! (does happy dance) I can't wait for more of this! Gaara: I can. Aww, shush, you! ANYWAYS (ignoring Gaara's death glare) I like how Naruto is so aquianted...acquinted...crud, how do you spell that? Aww, phooie! Whatever! ...how Naruto is so CLOSE to those children, and Sasuke and Sakura are all like 'oh...' Heh, I'd feel kinda embarassed or something after witnessing a moment where Naruto outsmarted me! Gaara: Of course you would. If a ROCK outsmarted you, you would too, and THAT has more of a chance of happening than NARUTO. (rolls eyes) Okay, ignore him. He's in a bad mood because I'm forcing him into a fanfic and my reviews, not to mention whenever me and my friend roleplay. (rolls eyes again) He can be such a spoiled-brat. Well, good job! Can't wait to hear more of this! Bye! ~DL ('Dragon Lover') and Gaara -_-; |
| DiffidentAngel 2007-03-15 ch 2, | abusei loved it, but i can think of critisism...not enough of it! but very well done :) |
| Sugarsnike 2006-11-10 ch 2, | abusePoor kids! that's like, depressing. but good. I like it ^^ -kyoko |
| Heart's Door 2006-11-04 ch 2, | abuseHm... An interesting chapter... ^^; |
| Shina 2006-11-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseAMAZING. I LOVE IT. CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE. I was gonna give you critism as well, but I can't think of anything bad! |
| cast14 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abusei loved the story its very interesting hope you will uodate it soon |
| Heart's Door 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuse'Tis very good! Not rushed, not long-winded, etc etc. I like it! |