Oh! I loved it! You really described Loren well, with her walls and stuff.

Love,

Vesja. (The Netherlands Europe)

LOL! Hubby says that being sent to buy "feminine hygiene products" is a right of passage. You are not in a committed adult relationship until you (the male) have to do this. Usually with the only directions being"I need pads" or "I need tampons". Said male (you) must then face the feminine hygiene products aisle. 7 billion varieties of tampons and pads to choose from and you young man must bring home the correct one. And you thought going out and hunting a woolly mammoth was tough.

Keep safe,

Anne

loved the story! Keep 'em coming!

Hi it's me again, liked the story, well its one in the morning here and my roommate just went to bed, so i guess i better power down and do the same seven will be here before i know it.

peace

Great way to end a great fic! Loved the different POV's and the idea of Clay taping the reactions of their co-workers was just brilliant! Sorry to see it end, but very happy that you shared it.
Love, Rae

ps. As far as I know, Loren was about five months pregnant when she got killed. I'm not sure she would've gone into early labor after a trauma like that, it could be a miscarriage as well.

great story.

It's finished. This was a really good story. It almost had a personality of it own huh? Forty-one chapters of how I would of wrote JAG. lol. I congratulate you on sticking through writers block and completing your story. It means more that you persevered through rough patches and completed it than if the story just wrote itself. To often good ideas are abandoned and never given a chance to have their happily ever after. I commend you another great story. One for the archives
Jabber jaws queen,

Cassandra

p.s I'll keep an eye on future stories.

Hey nice storie

But i have to be honest. The storie really started the last 10 chapters for me.
And while this storie is good. Iam far more interested in an sequel. That has so much more potential then this storie.

Please please please write a long storie about harm an loren
with childeren and them in better jobs. I think most people would love to read that storie. i would

hope i inspired you to write that storie. If you dont have any ideas i would like to help you write a plot for it

chears neon

Loved this story from start to finish, didn't want it to end, Look forward to your next

GREAT STORY, Sorry that it is done though enjoyed reading it. To answer our questions depending on how far alone she was she proble would have missacrried, I think any thing before 2-3 months More likly two months . Good luck can't wait to read it.

Love this story, at last the Admiral knows they are in love and intend to marry, but please tell me this isn't the end?

That was sweet. Glad Harm decided to let go of Mac. Can't wait for your next update! Good job!

Love, Rae

PLease tell me there is more coming? Great chapter loved the story

Mac is so heartless; no self respect. Does she know? Another great chapter, I love how you made them complete each other sentences, I can see it in my head.

I really think that you've done a great job with this chapter. Nothing too overdone, you showed Chegwidden's concern and complete surprise and how strong Harm and Loren's bond is. Great job! Looking forward to more!

Love, Rae