I especially liked the little peek into Jonathan's head there how he's worried about letting the others down.

yay! you are the queen of filling in small story holes! so great.
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Awwwwwwwwww yeah. What a mental picture that fic gave me. Mmmmmmm...

This is very good, I like it. I can picture O'Connell, Johnathan, and Ardeth Bey actually having this conversation. Your characterizations are very good. Keep writing!

Another good job. The characters were nicely done; it makes for a nice in-between type scene.

Very Nice.

Neat story i liked itespecialy the parts with Ardeth

AWESOME. GREAT JOB. MORE PLEASE!)Another one? I hope so.)

YAY! Most excellent! You really caught that sombre mood. Fantastic, as ever! Please write some more little ficlets!)

Very nice...very very nice... :D

Very good, again. I've always enjoyed your stories.

great job! You nailed the characters right on!

Very nice filler!

That's really good! You did great on this. You should write more like this!

Cool. Good job of doing Ardeths' POV. Odd that they didn't get around to introductions until so late in the adventure, but I suppose there were more pressing things to do before!)