but isn't Marcus' mate named Didyme not Marie?

It speaks! -haw haw haw- Though it's short it's alright. I would recommend editing Marcus' Mate's name to Didyme (which is her apparent real name) as it is somewhat distracting (not much)
And... that's all... hmm, this story is...three years old... your interest in Twilight has probably waned by now huh.

That was a nice story. Though I still feel bad for Marcus.

Her name was Didyme. (: Great story though.

I like it! Please make it into a story!

loved it lol

Wow, Yeah, I agree you should seriously write a bit more about Marcus. I've always wondered about him, it would be amazing if you were to add some background to him.

This is actually a really good intro to what would be a very interesting Marcus story. It has a ridiculous amount of potential. Cute for sure. If you do though, it should definately involve Bella somehow.
Anyhoo. Off to bed!

I think the writing was magical. I always wondered why he was so quiet, and now this gives him a reason.

I like how you gave him a heart (In a figurative way) Even though it was a broken heart.

-Katie.

marcus no one really seems to like him hes an interesting person i really like to wright about him but i havent really posted much

Hi again. Don't worry this one won't nearly be as gay as my last -look on star light star bright- but that was really good.

~This was absolutely wonderful, and I hope you really do write a story about Marcus. =)~

That's soo sweet!! Whoever would have guessed that Marcus the Lifeless had a love? That's soo cuute! I really liked this story!

this one was good! I like the way you actually make it seem like he HAS a heart at the end (and now I don't mean heart as in the physical way, but emotional).. I liked it!

Interesting.