the ending is funny and well the story is cute, nice job

This is very cute and adorable but personally should be reated T because of a certain paragraph in the story. Just saying better late than sorry. But anyways, good story and I would love if she accepted to marry Hikaru.

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cute

yeah...you may want to up the rating. Definitely not appropriate for the kiddies. :)

lol, yes, i agree. it shouldn't be rated K.

anyways, nice fic! =)

Aww so cute :P But how is it rated K? I would say it's rated T. Lmao. Good anyways. I love your stories. :D

another cute one shot from you!

kawai. its socute!!

sweet sleeping together they probably made love. lol ignaore that.

It's a rly nice story, but it ends too abruptly!! It makes a nice story to continue on...maybe

PLEEZ WRITE A NEW CHAPTER OR CHAPTERS OR A SEQUEL PLEEZ I LUV IT AND THE RATEING K+ WAS WRONG MORE LIKE MATURE

HOW CUTE! HOPE YOU MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER! PLEASE?!?

aw...at least you didn't put koaru in this story or else it would make me sob of the twins seperating...I want them to have Haruhi..hehe...

thx!!

Nice fic ^^

awe this is soo kute cant wait to c what the wedding is like!