Reviews for Halloween Party

Reviews For: Halloween Party

kirayasha aka kira 2008-02-08 ch 2,	abuse:D Happy (late or in my case, early) Halloweenie!! Yukis dressed as Akito... priceless!! Too bad Aya never got that pic... ;p
kirayasha aka kira 2008-02-08 ch 1,	abuseIf it wasn't 12 midnight when I was reading this, I'd be laughing my butt off about now... This was pure gold, especially Nurse Gure! XD (And it's only the first chapter too!);p
MysticSorceror 2008-01-25 ch 2,	abuseFirst off: I appreciate that the fic is old, I have a lot of old work too that people review but I'm hoping to read all of your Fruits Basket work so I'll have to start with the first ones and work up. I like this cat and the reoccurring imagery between chapters good work. I understand what you mean when you say you're writing with a time limit I've done that several times myself so I can appreciate how hard that is. There is some awkward phrasing and some of the names are spelled incorrectly, once again the language is too formal and I'd like to have seen more interaction between party goers. However I feel that Yuki has a pretty cool outfit and the Brokeback reference reminded me of Heath T_T. Overall the fic was fantastic and quite cute ~Myst
MysticSorceror 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseTo start with there are some spelling errors and you should separate the paragraphs based on which character they focus on and when another character starts speaking insert another paragraph. There are also some run on sentences and some scenes are a little more cheesy than others. However, you utilize great characterization, especially on Momiji in hand with a good plot idea to make a beautiful fic. I can't believe that Yuki let Shigure help him with a costume, a bit scary but Ayame wearing a stripper style outfit is pretty funny. Shigure makes me want to half die and half vomit, 0.0 I can't believe him. I love the Yuki-Haru relationship but I think that Haru calls Tohru, Honda-san, like Yuki does. The fashion police statement rocks ^_^ I think that your problem in this fic is that, apart from misspelled names, your language is far too formal and there isn't any major change between characters in terms of the diction or even style of their speech, due to the characters being so different their conversations are different too, work on that. Overall great start, I need to continue this soon ~Myst
loretta537 2007-09-24 ch 2,	abusethis is pretty good, although it might help when i search for completed stories if you list it as completed.
CatsEyeFlashlight 2006-11-03 ch 2,	abuseI really jumped when I thought it was Akito! Great job! I Love the fact that Momiji is InuYasha and Tohru is Kagome! That was very creative!
chibi18 2006-11-02 ch 2,	abusei loved it good job :)
Musa Rox 2006-11-02 ch 2,	abuseYou gonna update this? it seems like a good place for an ending... but I like this story! Please continue!
Musa Rox 2006-10-29 ch 1,	abuseEKK! Is it? Or is it just someone wearing a kimono? But, UPDATE!! This is really awesome!! Not to mention hilarious. And can u check out my story too?
chibi18 2006-10-28 ch 1,	abusei like it's funny can't wait for ch.2
Serinity's angel 2006-10-28 ch 1,	abusethis is good! can't wait for the next chapter! SERINITY'S ANGEL ^_~
cm1000 2006-10-28 ch 1,	abuseThis just made my day! So hilarious. Several things that I loved: Momiji and Tohru as Inuyasha and Kagome. It just sounds so cute. Hiro and Kisa as Frog Prince and Swan Princess. CUTENESS! Ayame as a policeman. Hilarious. But the funniest is...SHIGURE IN A NURSE COSTUME!! That made me burst out laughing! But Akito's come! What's in store for the Zodiac and Tohru? Update soon!
Does my name matter? 2006-10-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery well written, please update! I want to hear everyone's reaction to Akito being there! Be proud of youreself!
Cucu Bananas 2006-10-28 ch 1,	abuseoh i like it nice affects at the end upadte soon

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