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Reviews for: Premonition
Sarifina Filth
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
OMG I loved it! It's so sweet how they dream of each others safety! I think it was awsome.
Peach the Hedgehog
2006-11-01 . chapter 1
This was a deep story. And I loved it all. You had me hanging by each word, begging to know what was to come. You did a really good job writing this.

I'm glad I'm not the only person to do a Super Princess Peach fic. I really think there should be more fics around the game.
Flowerstar
2006-10-29 . chapter 1
That was an awesome story! ^_^ But very harsh too. I'm glad that Peach and Mario were both safe. :) I guess their terrible nightmares were nothing but a thing of the past. Lol, I liked Toad's comment when he said that Peach has to take her for "Joy" rides. It would be pretty fun for him, holding on to Peach while she spins, creating a tornado and can float as well. If I were in the kingdom, I would want a Joy ride too. :D That was a very beautifully written fic, it totally reminds me of Chicken Miasma's Beter Off Alone. Have you read that fic? I liked the song Perry sung but where did you get the lyrics from? And who sung it? At least, there's no swearing in this fic except for blood. I hate looking at blood, it's pretty disgusting to see, don't you think? By the way, have you completed the game yet? I did! ^_^ I unlocked everything! :) I hope you'll write more Mario fics soon and hopefully you'll do another Super Princess Peach fic! ^_^ By the way, is the game is your favourite? *puts this to favourite stories list*
4477
2006-10-28 . chapter 1
Awesome story.
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