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HevenSentHellBroken
2009-12-05 . chapter 11
This is my 3rd time reviewing this fic. PLEASE tell me you're gonna keep going. PLEASE. PUHLESE!
DJay
2009-09-01 . chapter 13
I love your crossovers Rurouni Kenshin especially. I hope you'll add another part to this series, this is the 3rd time I've read it and I enjoy it every time.
wheresmybook
2009-04-23 . chapter 13
I even started this story early and wound up staying up too late! So late that I couldn't even review it last night when I finished it! It was utterly amazing, and completely awesome. The way that you tie things together and aren't afraid to take the story into unknown territory is what makes you one of my favorite authors.
I am concerned about the virus threat. And the fact that Tomoe is alive...
Dybael
2009-01-06 . chapter 11
"...a silent promise that everything he was, was and would ever be treasured and protected"

I knew what you were trying to say, but the grammar is kind of awkward. I think the first 'was' should be 'had been'?

Geez, I've been reading through every last one of your fics, and this was the first error to stand out to me. Either you're amazingly attentive to detail, have a beta that's amazingly attentive to detail, or both. It's incredible - you have no idea how delightful it is to read such polished fics.
rurouni dee
2008-11-06 . chapter 13
Another awesome story. Great ending, too - it left room for you to write a third installment, if you wish. ;)
GoldenRat
2008-08-28 . chapter 13
This fic is so great! Building up from the Blades of Blood and even better.
kurotatsu72
2008-07-29 . chapter 1
In another review of this story, I made a stupid mistake; I suggested that Battousai hadn't been forged by Muramasa, even though now two flashbacks clearly show he was. I had thought Battousai's failure of the leaf test revealed him to be Masamune, which obviously he can't be.

On the other hand, apparently Muramasa-san truly surpassed himself when he forged Battousai; the dragon's fang's influence, perhaps?
Bloodsong
2008-05-29 . chapter 13
Wow. It took me about two weeks to read this on my lunch break, but it was well worth it. I just LOVE what you've done with everyone, your writing style is just the kind I love; with heavy doses of sarcasm and a smooth, flowing pattern.

I must confess, I did a quick spin-off dialogue, where Battousai's fang-giver came back to give the sword a hug. Kenshin found the whole situation rather awkward.

I can't wait to see what you do next! Keep up the good work!
Guile
2008-05-16 . chapter 11
Fantastic story, but there seems to be some kind of disconnect between chapter 10 and 11 - one moment Goren and Eames are talking to Kenshin at Silver Systems, at the start of the next chapter, they're tied up in Kanryuu's care. Was this intentional?

Still, love the fic. It's probably my favorite fic of yours, and that's saying something.
tcl7189
2008-04-29 . chapter 13
I have read both stories now and stand totally in awe of your talent...I hope you continue with this line! Thanks for the great stories!
Starlit Warrior
2008-04-22 . chapter 13
Wow! Great sequel! I really likd it, but why did you bring up the possible dragon heritage at the end of the sequel... you gonna run with that in another book? Um maybe you have...i'll go look, God Bless!
HevenSentHellBroken
2008-03-21 . chapter 12
*pokes to see if there is going to be another arc...*
Amarin Rose
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
A vampire who chooses to go by the name of the place where Jesus died? I don't think rising as a vampire is quite the same as being resurrected. Still, it's interesting, as was this story. I liked the disparate individuals that work for Targate Alpha; they're all so different. Misao is really cute, and the side-plot with Li Chi was different in a good way. All this talk of dragons...yes, Kenshin definitely is one. Very protective of his 'horde' - i.e. family. The backstory with Tomoe was very fitting for this universe, and so was the end Jin-e came to. I had been wondering for the first few chapters when Battousai would realize that Kenshin was his great-grandson, and I'm glad he finally did. I do wonder if Master Hiko is still alive in this 'verse, and what curse-interesting thing will be next to happen to the Kenshin-gumi.
Swordsoul2000
2008-02-16 . chapter 1
lazarus smile: anyone thinking Seta Soujiro? let's see, eeire fixed smile? ringing any bells?
Lightwhispers
2008-02-04 . chapter 13
More, please?

This is a great story. Well-written, interesting characters, and a great adaptation of the Kenshin storyline to a modern world. I will definitely be reading this one again. Thanks!
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