While there's nothing wrong with the content I'm guessing, I prefer the active voice.

There's a style out there encouraging the use of 'was'were'and'but'.

Her window was open, and a soft late summer breeze was blowing inside her chambers, gently stirring the white silk curtains.

Consider

Through her window blew a soft, late summer breezed into her chambers ruffling the white silk curtains.
Did you have time to read and review my story? I recently published 'The Esper World.
My structure isn't perfect either, however, we can exhange content ideas.)

Horray, Kefka's been destroyed by Terra with...wait...WHAT? Look, she was the only one left in the final match but she only destroyed Kefka with a simple stab from the Atma weapon?

This would've been more epic if she...I've got nothing to say. -_
Riggy Fraggy Noggy Rat Earthworm Jim mumble

But the ending was good, though.

Hey, Celes. Heh, isn't it strange that you have the same name as the character in this chapter? I haven't heard from u in years. On with the review
Celes didn't had to kill herself nor did Cid had to die. She could've just given him some fish that were fast and energetic, and then he would've felt better. Then she would've taken a raft which would've taken her to Sabin automatically...Pardon my random rambling.

I just saw that part I described on an LP on Youtube, it was a hacked version of the original game only it was named the Eternal Crystals. It had its regular content along with some stuff from ff4 and 5. It's cool, u should take a look.

I miss u, please update soon. And maybe continue with the novelization for ff4.

Your awaiting author,

Darksoul.

Thanks for writing this. I don't even know where I can buy this game, and I didn't want to watch it. So this was a great read!

Good chapter (as with the others). Some spelling issues (especially the inconsistency with Miranda/Maranda), but still a good read. I like how in this chapter you deviated a tiny bit and cut to the other groups. I also like how you explained how the helmet works, I always wondered about that. Also nice touch with the back story of how Gau used the helmet before.

I realy liked this story. The way you write it's pretty good, and you make the story flow very well.

Nice chapter, though I think you overused 'cried'. Sometimes verbs like barked, yelled, shouted, exclaimed, said, screamed and such would have been better and would have been more of a variation, just my opinion.

On to the next chap... later now I'll go for my 'beauty sleep'

Well, I found this promising FF a while ago, but never began reading until now.

The First chapter gives off a nice feeling, it's not the same as the Game itself, but this FF gives more of an advanced feeling.
Well, that may be because FFVI doesn't feature voices, facial expressions or graphics which allows to distinguish the exact emotions and occurrences.

It's a delight to read this FF, as it combines nicely the 'true Events of the Game and its dialog' and a more complete image for the mind, as a good FF should do.

I really hope the next chapters will be the same for me

And I'm curios what pictures you painted in addition to the beautiful art that is Final Fantasy VI

SeeYaSayo

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This is amazing and deserves far more attention than it's gotten. You took an already amazing story and expanded upon it, made it even better... Bravo. I cried multiple times. I only wish that more people in the world could know of the brilliance that is the FF6 Storyline and your novelization is the greatest interpretation of it I have ever seen.

Wow! This was an amazing novelization of Final Fantasy VI/III. Simply spectacular! Aside from the other criticisms and a few other minor quibbles I have, this is a perfect piece of fiction. I too am working on a novelization of FFVI, and I hope that I can live up to the same standards you've set.

I love the end of this chapter!

Edgar is such a lovely dork!

Love your writing by the way:D

*screeech!
This is my favorite chapter so far!

This is awesome so far! I'm gonna try reading it all tonight!

Despite knowing a great deal about the story myself, I also felt a great surge of pleasure from reading it.

I waited a long time to read this and it's hard to objectively explain it. It was great. The story was excellent but the battles only fell a tad short.

I could imagine the 'ten hits' knocking more people off. Also, there's more ways the spells can interact with the people and enviornment.

I might have proposed myself as a Beta Reader, but congrats on having the time to do it. I certainly don't.

Considering it's length I'd give it an A- at worse.

Congratulations! I hadn't read but I think this is very wonderful story. I'll try too to write FFVI in novel in french .