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xopeaceQTx13
2009-01-20 . chapter 11
i just said here reading your whole story until midnight! i just couldn't help myself, it was so intriguing and I just couldn't stop reading. This was definitely one of the best hsm fanfics i've ever read. AWESOME JOBB! : )

p.s. i hope you're happy, i have a huge test tomorrow and i'm prob gonna faiL! haha =]
deins
2008-11-08 . chapter 11
it's an awesome story :)
deins
2008-11-08 . chapter 6
awesome story :) keep on writing!
Ryuu Amethyst
2008-11-07 . chapter 11
Where do I begin,
This is just pure gold, dear.
Seriously.

When I started reading this, I imagined Sharpay trapped in this locked world, with no way out.
It was, riveting, to say the least.

Oh, and I've read your other stuff too. They're really good.
And as you can see, I don't write good review. :D

~RA
Morkhan
2008-07-10 . chapter 11
FFNet is a gigantic storehouse of crap.

Really, there's no point at all in denying it. The vast- VAST majority of stories on this site are terrible. Poorly written, utterly unrealistic, with characters and dialogue so one-dimensional and wooden, it makes the Barney the Dinosaur movie look like Oscar-worthy material on par with The Godfather.

But lo! In every rough, there are a few diamonds, and with stories like this, I can see that it's worth searching through the crap to find the cream of the crop. I loved this story, what with its lovely characterization and clever dialogue, imperfect characters and multi-dimensionalism. That's not really a word but I made it a word because the story is THAT AWESOME.

The only true criticism I can level at you (and I have to do this when I can, because I think that no matter how good a story or writer is, they can always be better) is that the events in the story often felt very disjointed, especially between chapters. A sense of flow would've been like an extra layer of frosting in the cake.

Kudos to you, and thanks for sharing it with us. ;-)
ah em illi
2008-04-14 . chapter 11
WOW, this was an amazingly wonderful fic.

Thanks for your fabulous writing talent! You've really impacted the way that I see writing! :)

- Emily
tennisplayerx33
2008-03-24 . chapter 11
i'm in love with this! heart it!!

luffly,
~tpx33
reader91
2008-03-21 . chapter 11
this was an awesome story...im sorry i didnt catch it while you were writing it but u did a great job...i loved sharpays character in this fic...the story was filled with cute, funny, sad, and intense moments which is everything a good story should have...great job!
Gryffindor Princess
2007-09-05 . chapter 11
I loved it and I loved the ending! This story was so deep and amazing. The second person POV worked extremely well here, and I think it really enhanced the emotion! I loved how the story was kinda like a songfic, but not with a whole complete song, but bits of different ones that told the story! I just loved this story so thank you! YOU ROCK!
Gryffindor Princess
2007-09-05 . chapter 8
I love this story! I've always hated that people show Sharpay as the villain, too. She has always been my favorite character and I've always hated Gabriella. She is the fakest person in the whole movie. I cried when I read Sharpay's speech, I really did.
DeGrAsSiMyAnTiDrUg
2007-09-02 . chapter 11
So I def just read your fic for the second time. Now that I've listened to some of the music things started clicking!! I love angsty stories. And Speeding Cars is THE BEST Imogen Heap song. I do like Hide and Seek too though. This was a great story the second time around. I liked it before but now I love it.
Kate
2007-08-30 . chapter 11
Haha, nice to see a little Gilmore Girls in there.
im2cool4love
2007-08-18 . chapter 11
great fic. the music in the fic was amazing, practically all of my favorite bands were featured. great taste.
misxokiedokiez
2007-08-18 . chapter 11
the lipstick shade 'dirty trollop' is from gilmore girls!
it's the episode where lorelai and her mother go to a spa!
soo...
do i get my cookie? :]
ActingPrincess
2007-07-06 . chapter 11
great i loved the ending. you should def do a sequal tho i loved the flashback portion your an amazing writer :)
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