This should probably be rated M...

1: I don't think Rude ever swears...

2: There must have been a lot of guys if they could take down Reno. I mean, he's at least on par with Cloud, if not stronger, right?
(That was an observation, not a complaint)

I can't tell if I like this or not. It's definately well-written, though.


-Kameko

*gasp!* RENO? DEAD? B-but...NO! *weep*

*sniff* aww man! I've always thought he's the type of dude that's gonna be the reason of his own death. Oh well...

Anwyways, it's a good story though. I like it that the Turks are still "in character" and Reno...well, still Reno.
The way you put his thoughts into words is also brilliant. In your portrayal he's strong, cynical and witty. Yet you managed to squeeze in the feeling that he's still human, still prone to bad things and stuff. And now i'm a blabbing mess because the thought of a dead Reno is HARD. Good work! Keep it up!