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| lala 2007-07-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseSad and to Short ... but really good I really like the meredith deadly bomb hallucination I hope your gonna make another like this one ^^ great story more long next time |
| Reyson 2007-01-02 ch 3,  | abuseFirst off, I can't believe that you killed off Rodney! I thought that you liked the guy?! Poor, poor Rodney! Second, you wrote this well (only a few minor typos – but hey, we're all human and I have been guilty of it myself) and it doesn’t affect readability. As for plot, you had a great mystery and story line going, however, the ending, as least for me, was a disappointment. Ideally, I would have liked to discover how he became separated from his team and scenes of his team going to his rescue and a happy ending. Also, you might want to give a little warning next time that this was going to be a death fic, but then, it'll probably chase away readers… lol. Anyway, Happy New Year! |
| Vampy 2007-01-02 ch 3, | abuseIt was actually very well written.. but the story wasn't that fun when I had all my hopes up that things would become alright in the third chapter and they didn't. Makes me feel kinda disapointed. I do hope you'll write more stories preferable with a somewhat more positive ending. ;) V. |
| Keyanna 2006-11-04 ch 2, | abuseOh no, Rodney! His team needs to get their butts in gear and come save him. Please? I hope you write more soon. |
| Jersey13 2006-11-04 ch 2, | abuseReminds me of the movie "Flatliners". Terrifying and creepy! Hope you post chapter 3 soon. |
| Reyson 2006-11-03 ch 2, | abuseSo McKay is being experimented on by ghostly alien woman... eep! Experimental flashback of little Rodney was good. I like where you are going with this, very original. Hope you show us where Sheppard and team are. :D Poor McKay - how is he going to escape this? |
| Silverthreads 2006-11-03 ch 2, | abuseFascinating inception. I look forward to more. |
| Era Yachi 2006-11-03 ch 2, | abuseThat's cold of her...this is the worst kind of torture. You write very well, you know. It actually got to me...but...it'll have a good ending, right? Someone must rescue him! Sheppard or Ronon or...Zelenka! He'll save him! -_-...I'm tired. But I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Era Yachi 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseOh...creepy...seriously. But how did he survive that? He should be dead! Was it a dream? I must know! *hurries to read next chapter* |
| angw 2006-11-03 ch 2, | abuseNo no no don't stop there. Where's the rest of the team - being experimented on to? |
| Tazmy 2006-11-03 ch 2, | abusePoor Rodney. What lie will he see next? |
| angw 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abuseOh please continue. A double twisted nightmare that the first was a dream and then upon awakening he is still stuck, this time in another one. Is it real or another nightmare? Creepy... |
| webster82 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuseI hope you do contuine this fic is she a freind or foe and how did he lose the rest of his team. |
| Reyson 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseCreepy! Poor Rodney. I liked the bit where he was worrying about frostbite nose and fingers.. very Rodney. lol. Yes, continue. I wonder who is that woman who caught him? |