Reviews for Sticking Together

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Empress Caroline 2007-12-19 ch 17,	abuseYay! Great way to end a fic! Lili: I SWEAR THAT LITTLE BLUE DEVIL IS GUNNA - TIku: crying But I didn't get to give her my number! WAH! smacks them both silly This deserves a sequel. I really like it when you write my characters, you write them so beautifully. And Kai and Xel were just hilarious! I have an idea for someone to do: You or me or someone could write a fanfiction where Lili and Tiku work with the Monkey Team to hook up Haya with Eclyps! ...Eh, just an idea. Anyway, keep up the good work!
Layla Fairy 2007-12-19 ch 17,	abuseA great ending for a great story. Can't wait for more work from you ^_^
4Evermonkeyfan 2007-12-19 ch 17,	abuseGreat story! I was thinking about making a crackfic and a story called one true love a spova yay! Oh well Write more soon!
Miss Queen B 2007-12-18 ch 17,	abuseIt's over, no, i love this story, it can't be over!...ok, i'm done. What a great story, i loved everyting chapter of it and thanks again for using my OC's. I like that part where Xel kept hinting Eyclps about Haya and that whole "young love" thing and how you foreshadow the idea of Xel playing match maker. LIke you said it could happen in your upcoming story "Another Party" or one of my stories, i don't really care but it's a great idea. But of course, that would be hard since Haya will stay emotionless when it comes to things like love and romance even when she's a young adult. I'm getting off the subject. Another job well done, and i can't wait to read the next chapter of your two other stories, "Strangers" and "Friend and Foe" until then, see ya. ~MQB
Dark Fox Tailz 2007-12-18 ch 17,	abuseThe last chapter was okay I guess. And all of the fights between the others may be over, but I think at least three of the fight are far from being over with, because Mandarin and Midnight never did get along right from the very start. Mandarin and Zinnaux, ever since Zinnaux found out, who killed his mother and father. As well as monkeynapped his younger sister, but got her back alive and safely. And as for Midnight and Zinnaux, they just really like/love to fight with each other. That just how those two are for some reason, until their girlfriends have kids.
Layla Fairy 2007-10-25 ch 16,	abuseI'm so sorry i haven't reviewed this earlier! Anyways great chapter as always TP. Hope to see more soon.
Dark Fox Tailz 2007-09-11 ch 16,	abuseI wonder if were going to find really out as to why almost all of them we're bowing to Haya. And also I have a funny and bad feeling that the fireworks are going to go off. When Midnight and Otto as well as when Sprx gets stuck to either Midnight and/or Zinnaux? Update real soon! PS, With all the melon sized bumps and lumps Sprx is getting on his head from Zinnaux and Midnight. We might have to start calling Sprx's by his new nick-name Melon Head!
Funny Love Girl 2007-09-05 ch 16,	abuseYou know I swear I mention something about love in the last chapter. Oh, well! Haya I am disliking her so much for some odd reason. She so unpredicable. Eh, maybe it because she doesn't have emotions like normal females... I just notice this now. I really got to start focusing on the story and pick up the clues. Blah, everyone so confusing especially Sprx and Nova. What ups with them, they are so happy together and here they are arguing. Haya does the most horrible things to the most happiest couples. Man am I nagging or just talking to much. Update soon and now I will zip it!
dragonqueenc 2007-09-05 ch 16,	abuseXD! Me: Good one! Dorry haven't reviewed latly...though I think Ecylps should stay wiht kia and Haya...It would be fun to watch! D.Wing: ...It was ok... L.WIng: GR...UpDate Soon!
Miss Queen B 2007-09-04 ch 16,	abuseoh my god, i don't know what it was but reading this chapter just made an idea for a one-shot to pop in my head. I have to type it down before i forget. Other than that, it's good to see Haya back in the story, that where she was fighting Lili and Tiku was my favorite part. You should get Xel anhd Eclyps to visit the hyperforce and thier friends. Can you imagine Haya's reaction of see Eclyps after that talk she had with Kai. I'm not going to say hurry up and update soon because i know how hard it is to have college classes and a job and it does take up a lot of your time. MQB
ArtemisWolfRose 2007-09-04 ch 16,	abuseYAYY!! ^_^ I like it, hehe...Antauri's JEALOUS!! HAHA! Anyways, good luck in college!!
Storm Of Sparks 2007-09-04 ch 16,	abuseIts really good, and i think Chiro needs, a little visit from a relative, if you can put my oc in plus she'll torture sprx if he gets flirty. heres her profile. You dont have to put her in but i'd really like it if you could. name: Melody age: same as chiro personality: kind careing sometimes can be mischivus. likes: High school musical music, her twin brother chiro Pranks at times, Half of gibsons lectures but will slam a pot onto his head if he doesnt wrap it up when she wants to watch the sun riders. Playing with her brother and sprx. ( its mostly rough houseing though ) dislikes: the other half of gibsons lectures. antauri's veggie shakes, sprx's flirting. ( Hey she doesnt half to like it. ) looks like: Wears a white shirt that says: Power priemate rules! and a black skirt and pink tennis shoes. hair color: Raven black like chiros only it goes down her back. eye color: Bright blue like her brothers. powers: The power priemate.
Empress Caroline 2007-09-04 ch 16,	abuseHey gf, I've been waiting for an update! Yay, funny chappie! Uh-oh...Lili's hiding in a corner muttering to herself... Tiku: Oh, crap. That can't be a good thing. hold each other in fear Hold on, there's one quick thing I don't get: is Luna a human or a monkey? Tiku: Luna? She said her name was Myra! Okay, wait, I'm confused... I think we know that by now.
ArtemisWolfRose 2007-09-01 ch 15,	abuseNyah! I loved this one!! Heeheehee...Antauri's in for some competition! Luna seriously needs a break, especially now since Otto and Giby are paired. Same with Nova and Sparks...AND Chiro and Mandarin. Oh, oh, oh!! Midnight should drag Antauri to following Luna and Allen and Luna getting all ticked off if she finds out!! THAT will be funny and dramatic. Antauri: You're EVIL!! Me: Dude, I'm told that every day!
Empress Caroline 2007-06-25 ch 15,	abuseSorry I couldn't review before now. My computer died. Anyway, I loved the little banter between Lili and Tiku. But usually when they yell at each other, they call each otehr by their full names at least once (Liliana Marie Cortez, Tiku Johnathan Fitzpatrick). I still say Linc should hook Luna and Antauri together until they admit they like each other. Keep up the good work!

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