| Reviews for Deep within |
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sweetkia13 4/10/07 . chapter 1It was a good story. But what is it with people and pink dragons? |
luv4powerpuff aka Joey 11/26/06 . chapter 6 Joey's my name!i mean nickname..i've been thinking about songs but i afaird you cant use it unless you know Manderin or Chinise this song have no transalation unless...its this one okay so its not exactcly what i think it is ..: We travel this road to find happiness. See? You look good with a smile on your face. These beautiful, fragile days are reborn, unfaded. In the season of dazzling burned seas and in the season of dancing snowflakes whenever I turned around, you were there. We travel this road to find happiness. Everyone is a traveler, carrying his own never-healing wounds. See? You look good with a smile on your face. How many times have I gotten lost? Every time, the one who extended hiswarm helping hand was you. *At the end of this long path, what will we think? Everyone is a traveler, wandering about in search of love. Let's go together until we tire of it. *repeat -there is still 2 more : The First Time (Michael Wong) When you look at me, I haven't opened my mouth You've already figured out, I'm still not certain I still haven't filled your requests Is it that I'm thinking too much, or that you are also avoiding? If you've really chosen me, I'll muster up the courage to accept Unwittingly, my line of sight has begun to become evasive Oh, the first time I said I loved you Breathing was hard, my heart wouldn't stop trembling Oh, the first time I held your two hands I lost my way, didn't know where I was walking That's the reason for us to be in love That's the two of us protecting each other (to me) Oh, the first time I kissed your deep dimples I wanted to be sober, but I became giddy Oh, the first time you laid down on my chest We didn't part for 24 hours That was the first time I knew what "everlasting and unchanging" meant I feel that you are a part of me, I feel your pupils It's the first time deciding, it can't be wrong -hehe last one! I've forgotton how long I haven't heard you Tell your favorite story to me I've thought so long, I'm starting to be confused Is it because I did something wrong again? Crying, you tell me- fairytales are all lies I couldn't possibly be your prince Maybe you don't understand: ever since you said you loved me The stars in my sky all lit up I'm willing to (want to) (will) become The angel you love in that fairytale Open my two hands, they'll become wings to protect you You must believe, believe we are like that fairytale story We'll live happily ever after* We'll write our "ever after" together* -well hope this 3 songs help! |
theXcrucifixX19 11/25/06 . chapter 6love it plz continue. oh and can you read my spyro fanfic when you get the chance plz. it's called the twin princess. love the story. |
Blackpelt 11/20/06 . chapter 5me: SPYRO! alex: shes obsessed. me: SPYROSPYROSPYRO! alex: ... me: this story is cool! Pink isnt my color though... but oh well! doesnt matter about me! sparx is actually a good name. i like the name. awesome story! update soon! seeya! |
luv3powerpuff 11/16/06 . chapter 5 i like this story! |
dragon482 11/16/06 . chapter 5When could Spyro see the pink dragon again? That scene with Ember kissing Hunter was hilarious! Update! |
Teh C00l One 11/15/06 . chapter 50.0 - : '.' -.- -_- like my faces? oh, great chapter by the way. update! |
dragon482 11/9/06 . chapter 4dragon482: That was great! Are the sheep and dragon really related? Blue Eyes: I don't care about lambs right now, I want some pork chops. dragon482: Can't you think of anything else than food? Blue Eyes: Nope. - |
luv4powerpuff 11/7/06 . chapter 3 Col...i'm gonna love this one!:-) |
dragon482 11/3/06 . chapter 3dragon482:Woo-hoo! Id still want to know her name though. Blue Eyes: Do any of you guts have some extra Halloween candy? dragon482: How'd you get here? And also your only a story charater from my Spyro fic. How can they give you candy? Blue Eyes: I don't care I want candy! *punches him in the nose* dragon482: Sorry about that, it's just my uneducated silver dragon from my story. (And he is a good guy, and yes, Blue Eyes is his real name) It's just annoying that he keeps following me when I review your stories. Blue Eyes: Hey! I am so edumacallit. dragon482: Oh yeah, what's 11? Blue Eyes:0.0' *passes out from confusion* dragon482:LOL! Review soon! |
dragon482 11/1/06 . chapter 2I wonder why she's the only one. I also wonder what her name is. Continue please or else I'll get my Blue Eyes, my story character, to eat your dinner. LOL! Just kidding. |
dragon482 10/30/06 . chapter 1This is in my liking. I wonder who she is. I bet it must be hard for her to be alone because of that curse. |
Teh C00l One 10/29/06 . chapter 1Hi! your story is great so far. I like the idea of the pink dragon bringing bad luck. It's sort of like in spiderman, blackat is in love with spider man, but she brings bad , update! |